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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school．As for your choice between the two courses，I prefer a four-week course because it will give me more time to do some traveling and make a few new friends．Of all the subject I'm learning at school，I like English best．I had learned English for 6years but my spoken English remains poorly．So I hope to take this chance improve it．If possible，I'd like to stay with a family in a few days in order that I can learn about any customs in England，which I'm particularly interested in．I believe I will have a wonderful time in this summer．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

分析 本文是李华写给老师的信，感谢他邀请参加暑假英语课程，信中李华对自己的英语情况做了说明，选择了适合自己的课程，对暑假的课程充满了憧憬．

解答 Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school．As for your choice between the two courses，I prefer a four-week course because it will give me more time to do some traveling and make a few new friends．Of all the subject I'm learning at school，I like English best．I had learned English for 6 years but my spoken English remains poorly．So I hope to take this chance∧improve it．If possible，I'd like to stay with a family in a few days in order that I can learn about any customs in England，which I'm particularly interested in．I believe I will have a wonderful time in this summer．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．
详解：
1．invite改为inviting 考查动名词．介词of后面接动词时用动名词形式．
2．your改为my 考查代词．根据下文I prefer the four-week course for 60 hours of study．可知，应是我的选择，用代词my．
3．a 改为the 考查冠词．前文已提到the two courses，此处指其中一个，用定冠词the表示特指．
4．subject改为subjects 考查名词．subject是可数名词，和all搭配用复数．
5．had改为have 考查动词时态．根据句意：我学习英语6年了．这里用现在完成时．
6．poorly改为poor 考查形容词．remain是系动词，意为"仍然"，后面应该跟形容词作表语，副词poorly的形容词是poor．
7．加to 考查动词不定式．根据句意：我真的希望有机会提高它．chance后面加to，不定式做定语修饰the chance．
8．in改为for 考查介词．表示某个动词或状态延续了多久，用"for+时间段"．
9．any改为some 考查形容词．any用于否定句或疑问句，some用于肯定句，此处是肯定句，用some．
10．去掉in 考查词语用法．this summer作时间状语时其前不加介词．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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假如你叫李华。最近，你收到美国笔友Tom发来的邮件。在邮件中，Tom说最近自己体质较差总是感冒，经常缺课, 因此他非常担心即将到来的考试。请你给他回一封邮件。 内容包括：

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2. 提出建议（重视锻炼、均衡饮食、保持心情愉悦）；

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注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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b．Free access to museums
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A．ac 
B．cd 
C．acd
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