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第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
最近你校对高一学生进行了一次问卷调查，调查内容和学生的反馈情况见下表。请你以“What I want to speak out most”为题写一篇英语短文，向《21世纪报》报刊投稿。

对家长	对学校
1. 不要给予太多压力	1. 创造良好校园环境
2．有更好的理解…	2．
3．提供更多的空间	3．
4. …….	4． ……..

注意：词数100-120，文章的题目，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
What I want to speak out most
As a senior one student, I have many things in mind to speak out.
Firstly, to our parents ,                                                                
_______________________________________________________________________________
If we can live and study in such an enjoyable environment, I’m sure that we can develop mentally and physically. Relaxing and free environment helps our character building.

Answer 1

One possible version：
What I want to speak out most
As a senior one student, I have many things in mind to speak out.
Firstly, to our parents, we expect them to have a better understanding of us and respect us. We also wish them not to lay too much stress on us and push us to do what we don’t enjoy. As parents, they should trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. In that case we’ll get along well with each other. Meanwhile, to be independent, we need more space of our own..
Secondly, to the school, I’d like to suggest creating a better environment for us to live and study in. As you know, we devote all the time to our lessons, so we’d like more time to relax. For us, relaxation is equally important. Besides, it’s better to be given more free time to think for ourselves. In addition, we hope to have more heart-to-heart talks with our teachers so that they can hear more about our opinions. Only in this way will we be greatly encouraged and throw ourselves into study.
If we can live and study in such an enjoyable environment, I’m sure that we can develop mentally and physically. Relaxing and free environment helps our character building.

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