题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换批改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中至多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在下面写出改正后的词。
注意:
1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A young man called low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests to living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.