假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(.)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（、）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jack，
It's really a pleasure to hear from you．As everyone knew，great importance is attached to birthdays and their celebrations．
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays with different ways．But the most commonly way is to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．Just on one's birthday，one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes being presented by friends and parents．Sometimes，parents will prepare a special birthday party for their child．
Surely celebration is one of the most important activities in one's life，and even meaningful things than that can be carrying out．For example，you can buy some flowers or cook an usual meal for our parents on that very day．It is through these deeds，I believe，which we express thanks to our parents in return for their love．

分析本文讲述的是孩子过生日的问题．
中国的孩子有很多中不同的过生日的方式，但是最常见的还是聚在一起玩乐．父母会给孩子安排一次特别的生日聚会，但是还有更有意义的事我们可以做，例如我们可以为父母做一顿饭来回报他们的爱．

解答 Dear Jack，
It's really a pleasure to hear from you．As everyone knew，great importance is attached to birthdays and their celebrations．
Chinese students celebrate their birthdays with different ways．But the most commonly way is to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．Just on one's birthday，one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes being presented by friends and parents．Sometimes，parents will prepare a special birthday party for their child．
Surely celebration is one of the most important activities in one's life，and even∧meaningful things than that can be carrying out．For example，you can buy some flowers or cook an usual meal for our parents on that very day．It is through these deeds，I believe，which we express thanks to our parents in return for their love．解析：
1．knew-knows．考查谓语动词的时态．great importance is attached to birthdays and their celebrations是大家都知道的道理，所以用一般现在时态，所以用 knows．
2．with-in．考查介词．表示"不同的方法"用固定短语in different ways．
3．commonly-common．考查形容词和副词的辨析．修饰名词way用形容词common．
4．去掉being．考查非谓语动词．做定语时，done表示"被动完成"；being done表示"被动正在进行"，本句表示"被朋友送的礼物"，所以用doing，因此去掉being．
5．child-children．考查名词复数．和parents呼应用child的复数children．
6．meaningful前加more．考查比较级．根据后面的than可知用meaningful的比较级，它是多音节形容词，所以加more．
7．carrying-carried．考查被动．carry out和主语that（代指先行词）是被动关系，所以用情态动词的被动 can be carried．
8．you-we．考查代词．和our parents 呼应用we．
9．an-a．考查冠词．usual虽然以元音字母开头，但是音标是一辅音j开头，所以用a．
10．which-that．考查强调句式．和It is 呼应，强调through these deeds用that做强调句式，I believe只是插入语．