Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

  注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

           2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。

As a boy grown up in India, I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the stories my father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in 1970s. My big moment finally come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to Europe, where my father was to attend for a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt was such nice that even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and thorough enjoyable, even for someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.

Answer 1

    As a boy grown up in India，I had longed to traveling abroad. I used to listen to the stories my

                 growing                                      travel

father told me about her stay in Canada and trips to Europe in∧1970s. My big moment finally

                             his                                                  the

come in the summer of 1998 when I was able to accompany my parents to Europe, where my

came                                                                                                              

father was to attend for a meeting. The service during the flight to Frankfurt was such nice that

                                                                                                                 so

 even today I can still remember them. The flight was really smooth and thorough enjoyable，even

                                           it                                                 thoroughly

someone as me, who is otherwise scared of flying.

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