Question

【题目】2015年两会前夕，原中央台记者柴静自费制作的关于环境污染的纪录片《穹顶之下》引起强烈反响。假如你是李华，请用英语给21世纪英文报写一封信，表达你的观点。

内容包括：

1. 阐述柴静所做的事对我们生活的影响；

2. 面临环境污染我们能做些什么。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

After watching the movie Under the Dome, I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did. ____________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

After watching the movie Under the Dome, I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did. The movie has aroused the public’s environmental awareness and is worthy of admiration.

Thanks to the movie, I’m strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment.

I approve of the view that everyone is supposed to take effective measures to protect our environment from being polluted. For instance, we can choose green transport like walking and bicycling. Obviously, the government should strengthen the management of pollutant emission. Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome. We do need the immediate change.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章是一个提纲式作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅，不拖泥带说，句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密，能够结合自己的看法，具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明，思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。