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7.假如你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,你将参加学校举行的英语口语,请根据以下提示写一篇竞选稿.
担任班长,深受好评;
组织和沟通能力强;
英语口语好,乐于助人;
当选后的打算.
注意:
词数不少于50;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Hi everyone!I'm Li Hua from Class One,Grade Three.Today I'm very glad to run for Chairman of the Oral English Club.I think I'm competent for the position.As monitor of my class,I often get thumbs up from my classmates and teachers.My experience counts a lotfor my good organization skills.And I'm a good communicator.Most importantly,my English is fluent.If you want to improve your English,I'm always ready to help you.
If I'm lucky enough to be elected as chainman,I will arrange some activities for you,such as English Comer,English parties and so on.I sincerely hope you will give me a chance and vote for me.Thankyou..
I sincerely hope you will give me a chance and vote for me.Thank you.

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文,根据所提供的材料,写一篇竞选稿.写作要点包括:担任班长,深受好评;组织和沟通能力强;英语口语好,乐于助人,当选后的打算.写作时应以一般现在时为主.人称以第一人称和第三人称为主.重要短语:in the future(将来),be competent for(胜任),get thumbs up (竖起大拇指,同意),count a lot (很重要),be ready to do (乐于做某事),be elected as (被选为),arrange someactivities for sb(为某人安排活动),vote for (投票赞成).

解答 Hi everyone!I'm Li Hua from Class One,Grade Three.Today I am very glad to run for Chairman of the Oral EnglishClub.I think I'm competent for the position.As monitor of my class,I often get thumbs up from my classmates and teachers.【高分句型】(担任班长,深受好评) My experience counts a lot for my good organization skills.And I'm a good communicator.(组织沟通能力强) Most importantly,my English is fluent.If you want to improve yourEnglish,I'm always ready to help you.【高分句型】(英语口语好,乐于助人)
If I'm lucky enough to be elected as chainman,I will arrange someactivities for you,such as English Comer,English parties and so on.I sincerely hope you will give me a chance and vote for me.Thank you.(今后的打算)

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点,并适当增加细节.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.

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8.请阅读下面短文,并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章
Behavioral scientists have done countless experiments to prove that any human being tends to repeat an act which has been immediately followed by a pleasant result.In one such experiment,a number of schoolchildren were divided into three groups and given arithmetic tests daily for five days.One group was consistently praised for its previous performance; another group was criticized; the third was ignored.
Not surprisingly,those who were praised improved dramatically.Those who were criticized improved also but not so much.And the scores of the children who were ignored hardly improved at all.Interestingly,the brightest children were helped just as much by criticism as by praise,but the less able children reacted badly to criticism,who needed praise the most.Yet the latter are the very youngsters who,in most schools,fail to get the pat on the back.
To give praise costs the giver nothing but a moments thought and a moment's effort一perhaps a quick phone call to pass on a compliment (称赞),or five minutes spent writing an appreciative letter.
It is such a small investment一and yet consider the results it may produce."I can live for two months on a good compliment,"said Mark Twain.

写作内容
1.用约30个单词写出上文的概要;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)赞扬别人对自己和对方带来的影晌;
(2)请以你的日常生活经历的事情为例,说明别人的赞扬对你的影响.
写作要求
1.作文中可使用自己亲身经历或虚构的故事;
2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;‘
4.不必写标题.
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当.
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Thanks to my mother,it was her praise thatencouraged me to go on.The more praise the child get,the more he can do..
5.请阅读下面短文,并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章.
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写作内容
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)支持或反对"冰桶挑战";
(2)用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点.
写作要求
1.可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;
2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4.不必写标题.
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当.
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