Question

6．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾（?）；如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
此行错一词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：原行没有错的不要改．
When people think about precious things，they usually think
about money or jewelry．I am not very rich，and I have                  （76）but
something very preciously in my room．It's not a CD player or         （77）precious
a cellphone．It's the view from my window．I'm lucky live               （78）lucky后面to
near a park．My window faces with the tops of the trees in                 （79）去掉with
the park．Below the tree I can see children on the playground，（80）trees
young couples walked quietly，mothers with children，and                  （81）walking
old people sitting on the beach．The whole world is before                   （82）√
their eyes．My classmates like to go online or listen to music，（83）my
but when I have a free time，I just sit on the chair and                           （84）去掉a
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room：the view．                        （85）enjoy．

Answer 1

分析 当人们提及珍贵的东西时，他们通常想到金钱或珠宝．我并不富有，但我的房间里有一些非常珍贵的东西，那就是我窗外的风景．我有幸住在公园附近，从窗户里我可以看到孩子们在操场上玩耍，年轻的夫妇在轻轻散步，妈妈和孩子，老人坐在沙滩上，整个世界尽收眼底．我的同学都喜欢上网或听音乐，但我有空的时候就喜欢坐在椅子上享受我房间里最珍贵的东西--窗前的风景．

解答 When people think about precious things，they usually think
about money or jewelry．I am not very rich，and I have            （76）but
something very preciously in my room．It's not a CD player or  （77）precious
a cellphone．It's the view from my window．I'm lucky live       （78）lucky后面to
near a park．My window faces with the tops of the trees in         （79）去掉with
the park．Below the treeI can see children on the playground，（80）trees
young couples walked quietly，mothers with children，and        （81）walking
old people sitting on the beach．The whole world is before         （82）√
their eyes．My classmates like to go online or listen to music，（83）my
but when I have a free time，I just sit on the chair and               （84）去掉a
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room：the view．            （85）enjoy

76．and改为but；考查连词，结合上下文分析，句意应为"我并不富有，但我的房间里有一些非常珍贵的东西"，可知此处应为转折关系，故用but．           
77．preciously改为precious；考查形容词，这里用形容词precious作后置定语，修饰不定代词something． 
78．lucky后加to；考查动词不定式，be lucky to do是固定短语，意为"有幸作某事"．
79．去with；考查介词，face作为"面对，面向"讲是及物动词，可直接加宾语，故去掉with．                
80．tree改为trees；考查名词，根据上文  with the tops of the trees 可知此处trees也要用复数形式．       
81．walked改为walking；考查固定搭配，see sb doing 是固定用法，意为"看到某人正在做某事"，文中句子的完整结构应为"I see young couples walking quietly"．
82．正确                  
83．their→my；考查物主代词，结合上下文分析，句意应为"整个世界都在我的眼前"，所以their要改为my．           
84．去掉a；考查名词，free time，空闲时间，是不可数名词，故去掉冠词a．
85．enjoyed改为enjoy；考查动词的时态，本文通篇用了一般现在时，根据句意"我有空的时候就喜欢坐在椅子上享受我房间里最珍贵的东西"可知此处也要用一般现在时，故enjoyed改为enjoy．

点评 整体理解短文，充分运用所学的基础知识，包括一些实词和虚词的用法，固定短语搭配，习惯性用法，结合上下文整体关系，找出错误并加以修正．