Question

【题目】短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，每句中最多有两处。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practiced. A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】make---makes

【2】unless---if

【3】found---found it

【4】feel---felt

【5】them---it

【6】succeed---success

【7】A day---One day

【8】sudden--suddenly

【9】exciting---excited

【10】much more better---much better

【解析】

【1】make---makes 考查主谓一致。此处的主语是Practice，为单数，应该用第三人称单数形式。故make---makes。

【2】unless---if 考查连词。此处是if引导的条件从句，故unless---if。

【3】found---found it 考查的用法。found it 直接加形容词表示发现......，故found---found it。

【4】feel---felt 考查时态。此处讲述的是过去的事，应该用过去时态。故feel---felt。

【5】them---it 考查代词。good at it擅长....，句意：然后我看着其他人很擅长，并问他们成功的关键。故them---it。

【6】succeed---success 考查名词。此处指的是成功的钥匙，应该用名词形式。故succeed---success。

【7】A day---One day 考查固定用法。One day有朝一日;有一天，故A day---One day。

【8】sudden--suddenly 考查副词。此处修饰found，应该用副词形式。故sudden--suddenly。

【9】exciting---excited 考查词性。此处修饰人，应该用excited，exciting表示令人激动的；故exciting---excited。

【10】much more better---much better 考查固定用法。句意：现在我游得比以前好多了。much better：好多了；好得多。故much more better---much better 。