题目内容
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
It is excited to visit different places.As you travel,you will see beautiful sceneries and you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races.Besides,you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people.Today people are very fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries.The main reason that people travel is,perhaps,for pleasure.For example,having been worked hard throughout the weekdays,people will go on a trip to the nearby mountains or beaches to have a good rest.For another example,spending a holiday travel abroad is especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much chance to be away from their homelands.When people return back from their travel,they will generally feel fresh and energetic,ready to work harder.Travel is also one of the best means of learning.You may have read or hear about something,and you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself.
分析 本文主要讲述旅游的好处.比如,可以看到美丽的风景,遇到不同肤色和种族的人,了解当地人的风俗习惯,旅游之后人的精力会更加充沛等.
解答 It is excited to visit different places.As you travel,you will see beautiful sceneries and you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races.Besides,you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people.Today people are very fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries.The main reason that people travel is,perhaps,for pleasure.For example,having been worked hard throughout the weekdays,people will go on a trip to the nearby mountains or beaches to have a good rest.For another example,spending a holiday travel abroad is∧especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much chance to be away from their homelands.When people return back from their travel,they will generally feel fresh and energetic,ready to work harder.Travel is also one of the best means of learning.You may have read or hear about something,and you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself.
详解:
1.excited改为exciting 考查现在分词.现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征.
2.sceneries改为scenery 考查名词.scenery指"总体的、全部的风景",表示的是室外的、自然存在的美丽景色,是集合名词,没有复数形式.
3.very改为so 考查固定句型.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.
4.that改为why 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词reason在从句中作原因状语,用关系副词why.
5.去掉been 考查现在分词.people与work之间是主谓关系,用现在分词作状语.
6.travel改为traveling 考查动名词.spend time/money (in) doing sth.意为"花费时间(金钱)做某事",其中in可以省略.
7.加an 考查冠词.experience是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指,因especially读音以发元音开头,用不定冠词an.
8.去掉back 考查词语用法.return包含有back的词义,back是多余的,要去掉.
9.hear改为heard 考查动词时态.and是并列连词,它前后连接两个相同的语法成分,read和hear是并列谓语,都用过去分词构成"may+have+done"结构.
10.and改为but 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非并列关系,用连词but.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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