题目内容

8．Here is my idea about how a friend is like．Firstly，（76）将how改成what
a friend is someone you can share your secrets．If you            （77）在secets后加with
tell him a secret，never will he talks about it with anybody       （78）将talks改成talk
else．Besides，a friend is always good listener when you         （79）在good前加a
need one．After hear your sad stories，he will say some           （80）将hear改成hearing
words that is nice and warm．Still，your happiness makes         （81）将is改成are
him happily too．What's more，a good friend is willing to      （82）将happily改成happy
offer the help to which you need，or can at least give you         （83）去掉to
some advices．In a word，friends are those you like and           （84）将advices改成advice
trust，and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with        （85）将spent改成spend
them．

分析 文章介绍了作者对于朋友的理解．
这是我关于朋友是什么的想法．首先，朋友是你可以分享秘密的人．如果你告诉他秘密，他不可能和别人谈论．其次，一个好朋友总是个很好的倾听者．听完后，他总会说一些暖心的话，让你很开心舒服．因为你的快乐也会让他快乐．而且，一个朋友在你需要的时候是愿意提供帮助的，或者至少能给你一些建议．总之，朋友是你喜欢和信任的人，是你想每分钟都和他呆在一起的人．

解答 76．将how改成what．介词about后是由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语． 因此要用连接代词what．
77．在secrets后∧with．这里someone是先行词，someone之后是定语从句，省略关系代词that，从句中固定短语短语"share sth．with sb"缺少介词with，因此添加with．
78．将talks改成talk．"never will he talks about"if从句中是一般现在时，主句应该用一般将来时，主句中将never置于句首构成部分倒装，助动词will后须用动词原形，因此用talk．
79．在always之后加∧a．listener是可数名词，且是泛指，因此要添加a．
80．将hear改成hearing．after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式，因此要用动名词hearing．
81．将is改成are．这里words是先行词，"that is nice and warm"是定语从句，从句中关系代词that是主语，谓语动词应于先行词words保持一致，因此应该用复数形式are．
82．将happily该成happy．这里是固定结构"make+宾语+宾补"，"make him happy"用形容词充当宾语宾语补足语．因此用happy．
83．去掉to．"offer the help to which you need"中the help是先行词，"which you need"是定语从句，从句中关系代词做谓语动词need的宾语，因此to多余，要去掉．
84．将advices改成advice．advice是不可数名词，无复数形式．因此用advice．
85．将spent改成spend．"you will enjoy very minute that you spent with them"中"every minute"是先行词，"that you spent with them"是定语从句，从句中关系代词作谓语动词spend的宾语，前句中用的是一般将来时"will enjoy"，因此定语从句中要保持时态须一致，需要一般现在时spend．

点评 短文改错是着重考查学生知识和能力的综合性测试题型，涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方面的知识与逻辑情理的推断和综合辨析能力．解答这类题目，首先浏览全文，掌握大意，然后逐句分析句法、语法、行文逻辑方面是否有误，改错时最好从最简单最熟悉的项目入手，比如先从语法角度入手，再从逻辑方面考虑，最后推敲难题．改好后最后反复浏览核对改后的全文，看全篇是否语义通顺．

练习册系列答案
相关题目
13．-I don't know what I ________ without the suitcase you lent me．
-Glad to have been of some help to you．（　　）
A．should doB．have doneC．would doD．would have done
7．London's newest skyscraper （摩天大楼） is called the Shard and it cost about 430 million pounds to build．At a height of almost 310metres，it is the tallest building in Europe．The Shard has completely changed the appearance of London．However，not everyone thinks that it is a change for the better．
The Shard was designed by the famous Italian architect Renzo Piano．When he began designing the Shard for London，Piano wanted a very tall building that looked like a spire （尖顶）．He wanted the glass surfaces to reflect the sky and the city．The sides of the building aren't regular．So the building has an unusual shape．It looks like a very thin，sharp piece of broken glass．And that is how the building got the name：the Shard．Piano says that the spire shape of the Shard is part of a great London tradition．The shape reminds him of the spires of the churches of London or the tall masts （桅杆） of the ships that were once on the river Thames．
The Shard has 87floors．At the top，there is an observatory．At the moment the building is empty，but eventually there will be a five-star hotel．There will also be top quality restaurants，apartments and offices．
Before building work began，a lot of people didn't want the Shard though the plans were approved．Now they are still unhappy about the Shard．Some critics say that such a tall skyscraper might be good in a city like New York，but not in London．They say that the best thing about the Shard is its spire shape．But that is the only thing．There is no decoration，only flat surfaces．The Egyptians did that 4，500years ago．They also think the Shard is too big for London．It destroys the beauty of the city．
Other critics don't like what the Shard seems to represent．They say that the Shard shows how London is becoming more unequal．Only very rich people can afford to buy the expensive private apartments and stay in the hotel．But the people who live near the Shard are among the poorest in London．So the Shard seems a symbol of the division in society between the very rich and the poor．
The Shard now dominates the London skyline．It is not certain，however，that ordinary London citizens will ever accept it as a valuable addition to the city．

55．London's newest skyscraper is called the Shard because ofC．
A．its cost
B．its size
C．its shape
D．its height
56．When he designed the Shard，Piano wanted it toB．
A．change London's skyline
B．inherit London's tradition
C．imitate the Egyptian style
D．attract potential visitors
57．The critics who refer to social division think the ShardB．
A．is only preferred by the rich
B．is intended for wealthy people
C．is far away from the poor area
D．is popular only with Londoners
58．Which would be the best title for the passageD？
A．The Shard：Cheers and Claps
B．The Shard：Work of a Great Architect
C．The Shard：New Symbol of London？
D．The Shard：A Change for the Better？
13．A wise teacher once told me that every teenager needs to experience a not-so-fun first job from working at a grocery store to the fast food industry．
Now I still remember my first day at a fast food restaurant three years ago．I wanted to save up money and buy my own car，so I applied everywhere I could that summer．The restaurant called me right away and I thought to myself，this is going to be easy．Within four hours of my first shift （轮班），I had angry customers who complained how slow I was．I watched in fear as a kid spilled his milk everywhere，and I heard the words that no 16-year-old boy or anyone for that matter wants to hear"Mike，there's a problem in the men's bathroom and you might want gloves for this one．"I realized right away that working at the restaurant was not going to be a picnic．The manager expected a clean environment and particularly，fast service with a friendly smile．
Over three years later I still work at that restaurant whenever I go home during vacations．I love my co-workers there and all the customers know who I am．Every morning the same senior citizens come in and get their morning coffees．They chat with us workers and joke around．Our smiles have just as much to do with them making us a part of their everyday lives as the coffee does．
From my first job at the restaurant，I learned teamwork and devotion．I also learned staying positive no matter how rough things seem to get．I will forever carry the experience that I gained at the restaurant with me as I go forward in my life．

81．Why did the author apply everywhere that summer？He wanted to save up money and buy his own car（No more than 12words）
82．What did the manager particularly expect the workers to do？The manager particularly expected them to offer fast service with a friendly smile（No more than 14words）
83．Why does the author still work at the restaurant during vacations？He loves his co-workers and all the customer know who he is（No more than 13words）
84．What did the author learn from his first job？He learned teamwork，devotion and staying positive in rough situations（No mom dm II words）
3．Some people believe that a Robin Hood is at work，others that a wealthy person simply wants to distribute his or her fortune before dying．But the donator who started sending envelopes with cash to deserving causes，accompanied by an article from the local paper，has made a northern German city believe in fairytales （童话）．
       The first envelope was sent to a victim support group．It contained?10，000 with a cutting from the Braunschiveiger Zeitung about how the group supported a woman who was robbed of her handbag； similar plain white anonymous （匿名）envelopes，each containing?10，000，then arrived at a kindergarten and a church．
       The envelopes keep coming，and so far at least?190，000 has been distributed．Last month，one of them was sent to the newspaper's own office．It came after a story it published about Tom，a 14-year-old boy who was severely disabled in a swimming accident．The receptionist at the Braunschiveiger Zeitung opened an anonymous white envelope to find 20 notes of?500 inside with a copy of the article．The name of the family was underlined．
"I was driving when I heard the news，"Claudia Neumann，the boy's mother，told Der Spiegel magazine．"I had to park on the side of the road； I was speechless．"
       The money will be used to make the entrance to their house wheelchair-accessible and for a course of treatment that their insurance company refused to pay for．
"For someone to act so selflessly，for this to happen in such a society in which everyone thinks of himself，was astonishing，"Mrs．Neumann said．Her family wonder whether the donator is a Robin Hood character，taking from banks to give to the needy．
       Henning Noske，the editor of the Braunschiveiger Zeitung，said："Maybe it is an old person who is about to die．We just do not know．"However，he has told his reporters not to look for the city's hero，for fear that discovery may stop the donations．

56．The Braunschiveiger Zeitung is the name ofC．
A．a church                        B．a bank                           
C．a newspaper                     D．a magazine
57．Which of the following is TRUE about the donation to Tom？D
A．The donation amounted to?190，000．
B．The donation was sent directly to his house．
C．The money will be used for his education．
D．His mother felt astonished at the donation．
58．It can be inferred from the passage thatB．
A．the donator is a rich old man                            
B．the donation will continue to come
C．the donation comes from the newspaper                   
D．the donator will soon be found out
59．What would be the best title for the passage？C
A．Money Is Raised by the Newspaper．
B．Newspaper Distributes Money to the Needy．
C．Unknown Hero Spreads Love in Envelopes        
D．Robin Hood Returns to the City．
13．Rae Armantrout，who has been a poetry professor at the University of California San Diego（UCSD） for two decades，has won the 2010Pulitzer Prize in the poetry category for her most recent book，"Versed"．
"I'm delighted and amazed at how much media recognition that the Pulitzer brings，as compared to even the National Book Critics Award，which I was also surprised and delighted to win，"said Armantrout．
"For a long time，my writing has been just below the media radar，and to have this kind of attention，suddenly，with my 10th book，is really surprising．"
  Armantrout，a native Californian，received her bachelor's degree at UC Berkeley，where she studied with noted poet Denise Levertov，and her master's in creative writing from San Francisco State University．She is a founding member of Language Poets，a group in American poetry that analyzes the way language is used and raises questions to make the reader think．
  In March，she won the National Book Critics Circle Award for"Versed．"
"This book has gotten more attention，"Armantrout said，"but I don't feel as if it's better．"
  The first half of"Versed"focuses on the dark forces taking hold of the United States as it fought the war against Iraq．The second half looks at the dark forces casting a shadow over her own life after Armantrout was diagnosed with cancer in 2006．
  Armantrout was shocked to learn she had won the Pulitzer but many of her colleagues were not．"Rae Armantrout is a unique voice in American poetry，"said Seth Lerer，head of Arts and Humanities at UCSD．
"Versed"，published by the Wesleyan University Press，did appear in a larger printing than her earlier works，which is about 2，700copies．The new edition is scheduled to appear in May．

66．According to Rae Armantrout，B．
A．her 10th book is much better
B．her winning the Pulitzer is unexpected
C．the media is surprised at her works
D．she likes being recognized by her readers
67．Which of the following is true of Rae Armantrout？C
A．She published a poetry textbook．
B．She used to teach Denise Levertov．
C．She started a poets'group with others．
D．She taught creative writing at UC Berkeley．
68．What can we learn about"Versed"？D
A．It consists of three parts．
B．It is mainly about the American army．
C．It is a book published two decades ago．
D．It partly concerns the poet's own life．
69．Rae Armantrout's colleagues think that sheC．
A．should write more
B．has a sweet voice
C．deserves the prize
D．is a strange professor
70．What can we learn from the text？D
A．About 2，700copies of"Versed"will be printed．
B．Cancer made Armantrout stop writing．
C．Armantrout got her degrees at UCSD．
D．"Versed"has been awarded twice．
3．假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由．
注意：1．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．词数120左右；
3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息．
参考词汇：文科 arts；理科：science
Good afternoon，everyone．
Welcome to our school!High school students are faced with a choice between art and science．It was not an easy choice for me to make．After careful consideration，though，I decided on science as my main subject of study．
First，science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China．Second，the science major can help me achieve my childhood's dream of becoming a scientist．Third，my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student．Last but not least，my physics teacher is my role model whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision．
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice．
Thinks!
20．-Haven't seen you for ages!Where have you been？
-I went to Ningxia and    there for one year，teaching as a volunteer．（　　）
A．stayedB．stayC．had stayedD．am staying
1．The"Chinese Dream"is ______ dream to improve people's well-being and ______ dream of harmony，peace and development．（　　）
A．the； aB．a； aC．a； theD．the； the

违法和不良信息举报电话：027-86699610 举报邮箱：58377363@163.com

精英家教网