题目内容
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改后的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Yesterday morning,it was already 7:30which I got up.Thinking I would be late,I got dressing quickly but left without breakfast.There were such many people at the bus stop that it was hard to catch a bus.So I rush towards my school.Suddenly,I ran into an old woman and she fell down.Without make an apology,I left him and went on.Later,I heard the old woman was bad injured in the leg and she was sent to hospital.I felt it very sorry.And the following day I paid visit to her.
分析 本文主要讲述作者起床迟了,没有吃早餐就去乘车上学.由于人很多,很难赶上车,只好向学校冲去,突然撞倒了一位老太太,没有道歉就离开了.后来,听说老人腿伤得很重,住进了医院.第二天,作者去医院看望了老人.
解答 Yesterday morning,it was already 7:30 which I got up.Thinking I would be late,I got dressing quickly but left without breakfast.There were such many people at the bus stop that it was hard to catch a bus.So I rush towards my school.Suddenly,I ran into an old woman and she fell down.Without make an apology,I left him and went on.Later,I heard the old woman was bad injured in the leg and she was sent to hospital.I felt it very sorry.And the following day I paid∧visit to her
详解:
1.which改为when 考查连词.根据句意:当我醒来时已经7点半了.用连词when引导时间状语从句.
2.dressing改为dressed 考查过去分词.根据句意:我很快地穿衣.用过去分词表示被动.
3.but改为and 考查连词.此处and表示动作的先后.
4.such改为so 考查固定句型.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.
5.rush改为rushed 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
6.make改为making 考查动名词.without是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
7.him改为her 考查代词.her指代前文提到的an old woman.
8.bad改为badly 考查副词.injured是形容词,要用副词修饰.
9.去掉it 考查代词.feel是连系动词,后接形容词作表语,it是多余的,要去掉.
10.加a 考查冠词.pay a visit to意为"参观",是固定搭配.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | 不填; and | B. | who; that | C. | whom; and | D. | that; but |
Luckily,both the mother and son were (44)Cseatbelts.The mother suffered a blow to her head and was unable to move.The boy was frightened but (45)D.As water came through broken windows in the car,he (46)Aunbuckled (解开) himself,climbed out of the (47)Bwindow,made his way around to the driver's side,and reached inside the (48)Cto free his trapped mother.With great effort,he managed to(49)Dher,pull her through the window and up to the road,where they were soon (50)B.
His mother later recalled her experience of the(51)A.Being unable to move or even (52)Cto offer instructions or encouragement to her son,she was(53)Dby her little son's action.She recalled (54)Bher boy saying out loud as he pulled her through the water,"I think I can,I think I can!"
It seemed (55)Athat this little boy's act of courage was from one of his favorite books:The Little Engine that Could.In that (56)C,when everyone else had(57)Dhope,the Little Engine carried the heavy load of toys and good things to eat over the hill to the children waiting on the other side.He had (58)Aand took action.Obviously this book had left a (59)Bimpression before the accident that rainy(60)Cand motivated (激励) the son to take action if the terrifying moments.
41.A.snowing | B.smoking | C.blowing | D.raining |
42.A.ordering | B.driving | C.pushing | D.flying |
43.A.rolled | B.fell | C.moved | D.stopped |
44.A.making | B.watching | C.wearing | D.missing |
45.A.afraid | B.dead | C.tired | D.unhurt |
46.A.quickly | B.carefully | C.nearly | D.happily |
47.A.student | B.passenger | C.family | D.worker |
48.A.box | B.room | C.car | D.ditch |
49.A.respect | B.introduce | C.recognize | D.free |
50.A.accepted | B.rescued | C.welcome | D.fed |
51.A.accident | B.experiment | C.travel | D.fire |
52.A.listen | B.sleep | C.speak | D.look |
53.A.excited | B.frightened | C.wounded | D.amazed |
54.A.seeing | B.hearing | C.smelling | D.feeling |
55.A.clear | B.sorry | C.useful | D.necessary |
56.A.poem | B.notice | C.story | D.dream |
57.A.realized | B.waken | C.kept up | D.given up |
58.A.courage | B.food | C.space | D.time |
59.A.bad | B.deep | C.false | D.general |
60.A.afternoon | B.night | C.morning | D.evening. |