Question

12．最近一段时间，共享单车在城市的大街小巷随处可见，它给人们带来便利的同时，各种问题及不文明现象也随之而来．请你根据所见所闻，说说自己的看法并提出建议，以"Bike Sharing"为题写一篇英语短文．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the"last mile"problem to schools or to workplaces．It is not only a greener method of transportation but also provides a user-friendly experience．However，the new form has also led to problems such as arbitrary parking，deliberate destruction and theft．
I think the bike-sharing service companies have faced a challenge to improve the offline business management to meet the demand of the users．More importantly，every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike-sharing develop in a more standard way．All in all，I hope the new win-win trend could have a bright future．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是关于共享单车问题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一共享单车的现状已经带来的便利和各种问题；二自己的看法和建议．
高分句型：
1．Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the"last mile"problem to schools or to workplaces．句子里bike sharing 是主语；as引导原因状语从句；an effective solution 表示"一个有效的解决方法"．
最近，共享单车在一些城市逐渐受到欢迎，因为它能有效的解决到达学校和单位最后一英里的问题．
2．More importantly，every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike-sharing develop in a more standard way．句子里has responsibility to 表示"有责任做某事"；to make the bike-sharing develop 是目的状语，表示"为了共享单车的发展"； in a more standard way是方式状语，表示"以一种更标准的方式"．

解答 Bike Sharing
Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the"last mile"problem to schools or to workplaces．【高分句型一】It is not only a greener method of transportation but also provides a user-friendly experience．However，the new form has also led to problems such as arbitrary parking，deliberate destruction and theft．（共享单车的现状已经带来的便利和各种问题）
I think the bike-sharing service companies have faced a challenge to improve the offline business management to meet the demand of the users．More importantly，every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike-sharing develop in a more standard way．【高分句型二】All in all，I hope the new win-win trend could have a bright future．（自己的看法和建议）

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