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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:把缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:1.在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

Appeal to Emotion(情感)

My childhood left three months ago on a plane to Austria.

It was a day when my baby cousins moved away.My cousins were a fundamental part of my life; they were not with me,they were on my mind.They brought back the untroubled days of my childhood, games,adventures and silliness,but they also helped me from an at-times selfish teenager into a responsible adult.

My aunt and uncle moved here from Boston with their 1-year-old daughter Yasmeen.They lived in an apartment on the side of our house and I was to have our family,especially a baby girl,so close to us.Yasmeen had close friendships with each of my sisters,but I knew the one that between us was the strongest.As she began to walk on her own and talk in full sentences,I realized my great upon her.I noticed that she’d some of my unpleasant actions, with her mother after I had done the same.Yasmeen made me realize what being a good really was.

When Maya was born,Yasmeen had a hard time .She was jealous(妒忌)of the attention we all paid to her new younger sister,so I did my best to keep her company when she might have not been .Once Yasmeen overcame her jealousy,she was able to Maya’s presence,like we all did.I tried to take advantage of our times together,doing my best to my schedule for my two favorite people.

My with Yasmeen and Maya has taught me the importance of influential people.I know that I have helped Yasmeen and Maya ,but “the babies” have had an even greater influence on my own life.They have shown me how to be a parent,a sister,a child,and most importantly,a friend.Our has made me a better person—a more patient person,with the ability to endless questions and spilled(洒)juice; an person,able to have fun and be happy with others; a role model, the babies ideas about right and wrong,and a compassionate person,able to forgive and love.

1.A.sad B.busy C.fine D.relaxing

2.A.until B.before C.when D.unless

3.A.against B.through C.besides D.for

4.A.lead B.challenge C.mature D.encourage

5.A.overjoyed B.embarrassed C.surprised D.afraid

6.A.ended B.started C.survived D.developed

7.A.pressure B.dependence C.mercy D.influence

8.A.doubt B.regret C.copy D.guide

9.A.debating B.arguing C.negotiating D.checking

10.A.leader B.partner C.friend D.example

11.A.sharing B.adjusting C.recognizing D.struggling

12.A.noticed B.admired C.comforted D.protected

13.A.ignore B.mind C.sense D.enjoy

14.A.affect B.accept C.free D.ruin

15.A.instruction B.experiment C.experience D.interview

16.A.grow B.succeed C.think D.behave

17.A.meeting B.relationship C.responsibility D.respect

18.A.review B.tolerate C.repeat D.avoid

19.A.honest B.independent C.aggressive D.enthusiastic

20.A.showing B.writing C.awarding D.permitting

In ancient Egypt, a shopkeeper discovered that he could attract customers to his shop simply by making changes to its environment. Modern businesses have been following his lead, with more tactics(策略).

One tactic involves where to display the goods. For example, stores place fruits and vegetables in the first section. They know that customers who buy the healthy food first will feel happy so that they will buy more junk food(垃圾食品)later in their trip. In department stores, the women’s shoe section is generally next to the women’s cosmetics(化妆品) section:while the shop assistant is going back to find the right size shoe, bored customers are likely to wander over and find some cosmetics they might want to try later.

Besides, businesses seek to appeal to customers’ senses. Stores notice that the smell of baked goods encourages shopping, so they make their own bread each morning and then fan the bread smell into the store throughout the day. Music sells goods, too. Researchers in Britain found that when French music was played, sales of French wines went up.

When it comes to the selling of houses, businesses also use highly rewarding tactics. They find that customers make decision in the first few seconds upon walking in the door, and turn it into a business opportunity. A California builder designed the structure of its houses smartly. When entering the house, the customer would see the Pacific Ocean through the windows, and then the pool through an open stairway leading to the lower level. The instant view of water on both levels helped sell these $10 million houses.

1.Why do stores usually display fruits and vegetables in the first section?

A. To save customers time.

B. To show they are high quality foods.

C. To help sell junk food.

D. To sell them at discount prices.

2.According to Paragraph 3, which of the following encourages customers to buy?

A. Opening the store early in the morning.

B. Displaying British wines next to French ones.

C. Inviting customers to play music.

D. Filling the store with the smell of fresh bread.

3.What is the main purpose of the passage?

A. To explain how businesses turn people into their customers.

B. To introduce how businesses have grown from the past.

C. To report researches on customer behavior.

D. To show dishonest business practices.

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