Question

5．假如你是李华，你所在的学校英语报向学生征文，主题是"十年后的学校"．请你根据下列要求和你的想象写一篇英语短文．
1．学校的外观．
2．教师的教学方式．
3．学生的学习方式．
注意：1．词数100左右；
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
                                                                                  
                                                                                 

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇描写十年之后学校情况的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时来叙述．内容主要包括：一点明主题；二学校的外观，以及硬件设施；三教师的教学和学生的学习；四梦想会成为现实．
高分句型：
1．First of all，the school yard is going to become a big garden and we will not be disturbed by the noise of the street because of the trees and grassland around it．句子里，disturb表示"打扰"，这里用了将来时态的被动语态；because of 表示"因为"，后面用单词或短语．
首先，学校会变成一座大花园，由于学校周围的树木和草坪的遮挡，我们不会再被街道上的噪音所打扰．
2．In this way，we can learn from teachers and teachers can give us some guidance when we have mistakes，as if we were face to face with our teachers．句子里guidance表示"指导"，as if 表示"好像"，后面用了虚拟语气．
用这种方式，我们可以向老师请教，当我们有错误时，老师能及时给予指导，就好像我们每个人都和老师面对面．

解答 Ten years later，our school will change a lot in many ways．（点明主题）
    First of all，the school yard is going to become a big garden and we will not be disturbed by the noise of the street because of the trees and grassland around it．【高分句型一】A big stadium is necessary for us，where we will play football，basketball and some other sports．we will have a morden library and lab，in which we can enhace our horizon，increase our knowledge and improve our practical ability．（学校的外观，以及硬件设施）
     What's more，the way that we study and teachers teach will change a lot as well．There will not be any books on our desks．Instead，each of us will have a computer，which is connected with the teacher's．In this way，we can learn from teachers and teachers can give us some guidance when we have mistakes，as if we were face to face with our teachers．【高分句型二】（教师的教学和学生的学习）
     Nowadays，the science technoly is developing faster and faster，so what I describe now is to become a reality in the future．（梦想会成为现实）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
as if 从句用虚拟语气的情况．
当说话人认为句子所述的是不真实的或极少有可能发生或存在的情况时．从句虚拟语气动词时态的形式如下：
（1）如果从句表示与现在事实相反，谓语动词用一般过去时．如：
You look as if you didn't care． 你看上去好像并不在乎．
（2）从句表示与过去事实相反，谓语动词用"had+过去分词"．如：
He talks about Rome as if he had been there before． 他说起罗马来好像他以前去过罗马似的．
（3）从句表示与将来事实相反，谓语动词用"would/could/might+动词原形"．如：
He opened his mouth as if he would say something．  他张开嘴好像要说什么．