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3．当前，越来越多的中学生开始吸烟，请根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生停止吸烟．
1）现状：吸烟普遍；
2）原因：学习任务重、压力大、时尚；
3）危害：影响健康、环境污染、浪费钱；
4）建议：宣传吸烟的害处、立法禁止吸烟．
注意：1）词数120字左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就越来越多的中学生开始吸烟写一篇关于作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：现状：吸烟普遍；原因：学习任务重、压力大、时尚；危害：影响健康、环境污染、浪费钱；建议：宣传吸烟的害处、立法禁止吸烟．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为吸烟普遍的现状．第二部分为吸烟的原因．第三部分为吸烟的危害及建议
重点短语与句型：
do harm to  对…有害
 cause a lot of diseases导致疾病
a waste of money浪费钱
 give up 放弃
高分句型一：It has been estimated that smokers have made up half of the population in China..此句用了it is V-ed that句型，人们估计…
高分句型二：Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves，but also bad for non-smokers此句用了not only…but also 句型

解答 It has been estimated that smokers have made up half of the population in China．（高分句型一 ）And the smokers are becoming younger and younger，even including some middle school students．（ 吸烟普遍的现状）
Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to people'shealth．However，some people still enjoy smoking．Why？Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion，some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh themselves．In fact，smoking is a bad habit．It can cause a lot of diseases．Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money．Besides，careless smokers may cause dangerous fires（．吸烟的原因）
Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves，but also bad for non-smokers．（高分句型二）Therefore，I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them．（吸烟的危害及建议）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．