第一节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．第一节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
In order to promote participation in outdoors exercise，our school organized an activity to climb Mount Tai on April 10．The majority of my classmates joined the activity．
Early in the morning，having assembled outside the school gate，we head straight to Mount Tai．We set out for the top in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain．In a course of the climb，we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky and steep areas．Laughing and cheering，we eventually reached the summit，which we greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air．Viewing from the top，the city was beautiful．Bathed in the warm sunshine，we entertained us with stories，songs，dances and game．
This event was extremely beneficial for not only did we take a break from our heavy school workload，but we also learned how to cooperate．Therefore，we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!

分析本文主要讲述学校组织学生爬泰山活动．通过活动，学生们暂时从繁重的学习中得到了休息，同时也学会了如何合作，这对学生们是有益的．

解答 In order to promote participation in outdoors exercise，our school organized an activity to climb Mount Tai on April 10．The majority of my classmates joined∧the activity．
Early in the morning，having assembled outside the school gate，we head straight to Mount Tai．We set out for the top in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain．In a course of the climb，we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky and steep areas．Laughing and cheering，we eventually reached the summit，which we greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air．Viewing from the top，the city was beautiful．Bathed in the warm sunshine，we entertained us with stories，songs，dances and game．
This event was extremely beneficial for not only did we take a break from our heavy school workload，but we also learned how to cooperate．Therefore，we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
1．outdoors改为outdoor 考查词语用法．outdoors意为"在露天，在户外"，是副词，outdoor意为"（在）户外的，（在）室外的"，是形容词，此处需要用形容词修饰名词．
2．joined后加in 考查词语用法．join的宾语一般是sb或组织团体等，表示成为其中的一员． join in等于take part in，它们的宾语都是如比赛/竞赛/考试等各种各样的活动
3．head改为headed 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，用一般过去时态．
4．去when 考查连词．"the moment+句子"用来引导状语从句，意为"一…就"，所以去when．
5．a改为the 考查固定搭配．in the course of意为"在…期间"，是固定搭配．
6．which改为where 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词the summit指地点，在从句中作状语，用关系副词where．
7．viewing改为viewed 考查过去分词．the city和view之间是被动关系，用过去分词短语作状语．
8．us改为ourselves 考查代词．此处表示我们自我娱乐，用ourselves．
9．game改为games 考查名词．前面stories，songs，dances都用的名词复数，所以game也应是复数形式．
10．are改为be 考查虚拟语气．suggest表示建议时，后面的宾语从句用（should ）+动词原形的虚拟语气，其中should可省略．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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17．Being physically active three times a week reduces the odds of being depressed by about 16%，according to new UCL research carried out as part of the Public Health Research Center．
The study，published in JAMA Psychiatry，found a two-way relationship between depression and physical activity．People who increased their weekly activity reported fewer depressive symptoms but those with more depressive symptoms were less active，particularly at younger ages．
Researchers followed 11，135 people born in 1958 up until the age of 50，recording depressive symptoms and levels of physical activity at regular intervals in adulthood．They found that each additional activity period per week reduced odds of depression by 6%．In England 19% of men and 26% of women are currently classed as"inactive"，and this study suggests that activity could significantly improve their mental as well as physical health．
"Assuming the association is causal，physical activity has a protective effect against depression．If an adult between their twenties and forties who isn't physically active became active 3times per week，they would reduce their risks of depression by about 16%．"says Dr．Snehal of the UCL Institute of Child Health，lead author of the study．
Professor Mark，Director of the Public Health Research Center，said，"Many people are already aware of the benefits of physical activity on their general health，but now we are seeing more evidence that suggest it also has a positive effect on a person's mental well-being．The latest research highlights just how important it is to ensure that people are working and living in environments that allow them to be both physically active and mentally healthy．"

25．What is the author's purpose in writing the passage？B
A．To tell us a fun story about how to protect us against depression．
B．To introduce a research on the link between activity and depression．
C．To persuade readers to increase their weekly activity．
D．To describe the disadvantages of physical activity．
26．According to the second paragraph，if people increase their weekly activity，A．
A．their depressive symptoms will be fewer
B．their depressive symptoms will be more
C．they will become much younger
D．they will become more depressive
27．Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage？D
A．Dr．Snehal thinks it important to be both physically and mentally healthy．
B．The research shows men are more active in physical activities than women．
C．Adults who insist on physical activity will reduce depression completely．
D．Increasing physical activities can free people from depression in a way．
28．The author shows his view mainly byB．
A．doing research
B．comparing and contrasting
C．trying on himself
D．discussing and summarizing．

14．Bending over the kitchen table，my five-year-old daughter Martha is hard at work on her latest masterpiece"Do you like my fishes，Mummy？"She asked．"They've got really friendly eyes．I'm good at houses，too．This one can be a home for a princess．"
It's the typical morning chatter that tells me my youngest is busy-and I can do some washing and cleaning．Martha is not drawing on paper．Instead，her canvas （面布） is a rather lovely dress that cost me￡58．I let Martha loose on a dress with some colours and a happy smile．Needless to say，she's enjoying every minute．
To carry out her drawings，Martha is using what she describes as her magic pen The brilliant thing is，if you make a mistake you can erase it in an instant with a slightly damp cloth．
That's pretty easy when you have a 10cm flower to perfect．Then it's time to position our first row of houses．There are three town streets on the design between a river and green fields．The first house is in the centre，just below the neckline，followed by two other houses on either side．Once our design is completed，it's time to add the rest of the colour．Now I'm feeling nervous．We're using pens that are permanent，so there's no going back And in the next hour，we complete a child's version，too-￡675for the D&G kids'dress，￡47for ours．
Martha's pleased with her work and it kept her amused for the entire morning．
Would I wear it？Only on a sunny day"You can't go out in the rain，Mummy，"advises Martha"The fishes will swim away and the houses will melt．"

25．Where did Martha draw her pictures？C
A．On the kitchen table．
B．On a piece of cloth．
C．On the author's dress．
D．On the wall of the house．
26．What is special about Martha's magic pen？B
A．She seldom makes mistakes when using it．
B．The mistakes can be wiped off with wet cloth
C．She can carries out her drawing continuously．
D．It was once used by a princess in this country．
27．Why does the author feel nervous when adding color？D
A．Because there is little ink left in the magic pen
B．Because they put the house in the centre．
C．Because there are houses on both sides．
D．Because the color can't be wiped off．

1．It's one o'clock on Monday 23 March Raquel Ramos Garcia has just come home to find this card with her mail．
Front Back

Royal Mail
Sorry，you were out

Time 12：32	Today's date 23 March
Name Raquel Ramous Garcia Address 133 Charlton Road Reading Postcode RG24 7AW
You were out and your □Special Delivery□Letter □International Item?Recorded Signed for □Packet□Perishable item□Large item could not be delivered to you
because ?A signature is required □It's too big for your letterbox Please see the back for information on where your item is now．
Item number ZH 5631 8734 5GB
www．royalmail．com/redelivery

Your item has been left：
□In your"Safeplace"on your property at：
□with your designated neighbor at：

?Has been returned to the Royal Mail Delivery Office at：
Royal Mail
Reading Delivery Office
84 Caversham Road
Verkshire，RGI IAA
TEL：08456 113 227
HOURS：MON-FRI：0600-1800
SAT：0600-1230
You can：
Collect the item．Please leave 2 hours before collecting so that postman can bring your item back to the Delivery Office．You'll need to bring evidence of your identity such as a passport or your behalf，they'll need to provide proof of your identity．

Redelivery or"Local Collect"services：
To arrange visit us online at or call the number above．
We can redeliver to your address or to an alternative local address．Or for 150p you can have your item taken to a local Post Office Branch for you to pick up using our"Local Collect"service．

Please note：we'll keep a Recorded item for 1 week，and all other items for 3 weeks before returning them to the sender．

21．Raquel's item of mail is most probablyC．
A．in a"safeplace"in the garden
B．with a neighbor
C．going back to the Delivery Office
D．in a local post office
22．The earliest time Raquel can collect the item isC．
A.12：32
B.1：00 p．m．
C.2：32 p．m．
D.3：00 p．m．
23．Which of the following is TURE according to the card？B
A．If someone else goes for her，they have to show their passport or bank card．
B．Raquel has to pay if she wants to collect the letter from her nearest post office．
C．Raquel has to phone if she wants to collect the letter．
D．Raquel has four weeks from when she gets the card to collect her letter．
24．Which of the following would be a good heading for the back of the card？B
A．We'll call again
B．How to get your item
C．Royal Mail Services in your area
D．Contact us．

11．The Golden Gate Bridge in San Francisco，California is one of the world's most beautiful bridges．It is also one of the most visited places in the world．More than 1800 hundred million vehicles have used the bridge since it opened more than 70 years ago．
The bridge was painted"International Orange"because that color went well with the natural surroundings．The color also is easier to see in the heavy fog that often covers the area．But the Golden Gate Bridge was not named for its orange color．It was named for the body of water that it crosses，the Golden Gate Strait，which is the entrance to the San Francisco Bay from the Pacific Ocean．
Planning for the bridge began in the 1920s when the area around San Francisco was growing．People living in the area needed another way to get to the city besides small ferries．Joseph Strauss was the chief engineer for the project．Work began in 1934．Mr．Strauss demanded the strongest safety protections in the history of bridge building．These included the first use of"hard hats"to protect the workers'heads and special glasses to protect their eyes．A special safety net was suspended under the bridge．This net saved the lives of 19 men during the construction．
The Golden Gate Bridge opened in 1937．It extends 1，280 meters across the water．The total length is 2，737 meters．It was the largest suspension bridge（吊桥） in the world until 1964．That is when the Verrazano Narrows Bridge opened in New York City．Today，the Golden Gate Bridge is the ninth longest suspension bridge in the world．

29．What was the Golden Gate Bridge named after？A
A．The Strait it crosses．
B．The color of paint．
C．The local climate．
D．Its natural surroundings．
30．How did people cross the Golden Gate Strait before the bridge was built？D
A．By plane．
B．By train．
C．By road．
D．By boat．
31．Why was a special safety net suspended under the bridge？B
A．Because it can protect the environment．
B．Because it can prevent workers from falling．
C．Because it can make construction easier．
D．Because it can save building materials from falling．
32．What do we know about Joseph Strauss？C
A．He built the first suspension bridge in the world．
B．His safety measures were not of practical value．
C．He attached importance to the workers'safety．
D．He demanded strong measures to ensure the safety of the bridge．

18．KBG84 is a one-of-a-kind girl band in Japan consisting of 33 singing and dancing grannies，with an average age of 84．The oldest member，Haru Yamashiro，is 97 years old!
The new band，based in the remote island of Kohama in Okinawa，is a huge hit in the country-so much so that the members are rather shocked by their success．Their first single-titled Come on and Dance，Kohama Island-has made it to the top of the charts，and they've just completed a sellout tour of Japan．
"We felt like stars in Tokyo，"added 86-year-old Hideko Kedamori．"Everyone in the audience had a big smile，which gave us the energy to sing our hearts out．We're blessed to have been born in Kohama．Our lyrics are about the island and nature-whales in the sea spouting or dolphins doing somersaults（空翻）．"Regardless of the lyrics，these elderly women are incredibly charming when they perform．Their energy and enthusiasm is amazing，considering their age．In fact，no one under the age of 80is allowed into the band．
It turns out that the pop queens are blessed with incredible genes-Okinawan islanders have one of the highest life expectant in the world．Their diet chiefly consists of vegetables and local purple-fleshed sweet potatoes，with practically no added sugar．Menaka said she isn't particular about her diet．
"I look after my health by cleaning my home，wiping the floors，steaming rice，"
she said．"I stay in the shade when it's too hot．I don't．want to get burnt．I have to take care of my skin-I'm still young at heart!"

28．What's the aim of writing the passage？B
A．To tell us KBG84 is the best band in Japan．
B．To introduce a popular band in Japan．
C．To show why KBG84 is so popular．
D．To prove the elderly can become stars．
29．How did the members of KBG84feel when they succeeded？A
A．Very surprised．
C．A little proud．
B．Rather calm．
D．Fairly content．
30．What are the lyrics of KBG8 about？C
A．The women's interests．
B．Inspiring stories．
C．Kohama and nature．
D．Whales and dolphins'food．
31．What Menaka said in the last paragraph suggestsA．
A．she keeps fit by doing housework
B．taking exercise every day brings her joy
C．she likes high temperature very much
D．her good skin is what she takes pride in．

15．"I can't live without my mobile phone!"is what I often hear people say as they talk about how mobiles have become an essential part of their lives．
    The all so common sight of heads bent，eyes staring at mobile screens and fingers busy tapping away repeats itself across major cities around the world．Whenever there is a moment to spare while on the train，taxi or waiting in a queue，people busy themselves with their mobile phones．
    Some people believe our unhealthy obsession with mobile phones is destroying how we appreciate the little things in life or miss the moments that matter．The truth is that technology overall should be seen as just a tool to improve our lives．
    Mobile phones have certainly had a great influence on our lives，but I truly believe it is for the better．
    It's changed the way we communicate，whether for work or play．We are now less constrained（限制）by time and geographical location．With my mobile phone，I can dial into conference calls while stuck in a traffic jam，or reply to urgent e-mails while on the go．I can send a text message or share photos and videos with friends who aren't living in the same country．My phone calendar keeps my life organized，and even Facebook，Twitter，and instant messaging are now accessible from mobile phones!
    The mobile revolution isn't just changing the lives of urbanities （都市人） like myself．I know of a young Bangladeshi woman named Shompa Akhter who is crazy about fashion and design．She dreamt about starting her own business and she did just that，opening a shop in Kushtia featuring her own creations．Dealing with supplies in different towns was a problem for Shompa---purchase orders had to either be hand delivered or mailed out to supplies．Shompa also found it tough publicizing （宣传）her business to potential customers outside her town．But once she learnt to operate the mobile phone，she was addicted．The 25-year-old businesswoman now stays in touch easily with her suppliers．Mobile e-mail is a blessing in her life．
    Who would have thought that mobility could bring about such enormous change？It shouldn't really be a surprise though．

51．In the first two paragraphs，the author wants to showD．
A．mobile phones make people communicate less
B．mobile phones make people's life more enjoyable
C．people's health is greatly affected by mobile phones
D．people become addicted to mobile phones in daily life
52．What's the author's attitude towards mobile phones？A．
A．Supportive         B．Doubtful           C．Critical    D．Uninterested
53．Paragraph 5 is mainly aboutC．
A．new functions of mobile phones
B．new changes in Information Age
C．the advantages of mobile phones
D．the author's personal experiences
54．What do we know about Shompa？D
A．She operates a food store
B．She is addicted to Internet surfing
C．Mobile e-mail is still unavailable to her
D．Her mobile phone helped her business a lot
55．How is the text mainly developed？D
A．By inferring．
B．By listing examples．
C．By giving explanations．
D．By comparing different ideas．

16．Ann never dreams of a chance for her to be sent abroad very soon．（　　）

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