Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“我理想的大学生活”，请根据下列要求和你的畅想完成短文。

l.专业与课程； 2.老师与同学； 3.学校活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.司以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream University

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Answer 1

【答案】

I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university. As far as I can imagine, I’ll be admitted to Shandong University, where I’ ll major in English. I can choose a variety of courses, which will help me improve my spoken English and have a better understanding of foreign cultures.

The professors there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons. In addition, I’ll have lovely and caring classmates. We’ll compete in our study and be close friends in our daily life. In our free time, various activities will be held to build up our courage and experience, such as parties and competitions. I’m sure my college life will be rich and colorful.

【解析】

试题分析：注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】第一段第一个句子是宾语从句I often imagine what my life will be like in my dream university. 我经常想象在我梦想的大学里，我的生活会怎样。第二句是一个where引导的非限制性定语从句As far as I can imagine, I’ll be admitted to Shandong University, where I’ ll major in English. 就我能想想象的，我将会考上山东大学的英语专业。第三句是一个which引导的非限制性定语从句I can choose a variety of courses, which will help me improve my spoken English and have a better understanding of foreign cultures.我可以选很多课，这将帮助我改进我的英语口语并且能更好的理解外国文化。第二段中第一句是whose引导的非限制性定语从句 The professors there will be friendly and knowledgeable, with whose help not only can I enrich my knowledge but also I can broaden my horizons.教授是友好、学识广博，在他的帮助下我不仅可以增长知识，也能开阔视野。除此之外还使用了很多比较好的结构和短语：admitte to允许进入…； not only… but also不仅…而且；In addition此外；compete in竞争…；build up建立； such as例如。

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