When you arc paying upwards of£15.000a year to have your child privately educated.the big surn of money for extra tuitionmay not sit well with you．But that is exactly what seems to be happening� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．When you arc paying upwards of£15，000a year to have your child privately educated，the big surn of money for extra tuition（学费）may not sit well with you．But that is exactly what seems to be happening．An increasing number of parents look to"top-up"their child's already expensive education with a private tutor．
According to managing director Nevil Chiles of Kensington&Chelsea Tutors，the agency's students tend to fall into two groups．There are those who are struggling with a particular subject and benefit from one-to-one tuition．The second group consists of students who are already excellent but whose parents want to ensure they go on to their preferred school or university．
"We felt Mica needed help with exam technique and we also realized that she did much better one-to-one than in a classroom，"explains Bowman，who contacted Kensington & Chelsea Tutors on the advice of a friend who used them for her sons，including one who was attending Eton．"Mica has established a good relationship with her tutors and has gained confidence as a result of the tutoring．"adds Bowman．
写作内容：
1．用约30个单词概括短文主要内容：．
2．简要分析社会上私人辅导受欢迎的原因（至少两条）：
3．谈谈你对私人辅导的态度（支持或反对），并说明原因（至少两条）．
写作要求：
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句：
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：
3．标题已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：私人辅导private tutoring：家庭教师tutor
评分标准：
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当
注意：请将书面表达撰写在答题卡上．
Private Tutoring．

分析本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称．重要短语：excelling（胜于），turn into（变成），account for（解释），various reasons（各种理由），miss the chance of（错过机会），obtain good education（获得良好教育），meet with difficulties（遇到困难），instruct sb（指导某人），have reservations about（保留意见），a burden to（…的负担），in addition（除…还有），be under a lot of pressrure （处在压力之下），in conclusion（总之），rely on （依赖）．
【高分句型一】
1．When their children meet with difficulties in study，they are helpless．
此处是由连词"When"引导的时间状语从句，主句为"they are helpless"．
【高分句型二】
2．Besides，as private tutoring is usually one-to-one，parents believe the teacher can instruct the students better．
此处是由连词"as"引导的原因状语从句，主句为"parents believe the teacher can instruct the students better"．
【高分句型三】
3．There is a danger that students will lose the love of learning with too much work．
此处是由连词"that"引导的同位语从句，"that"无意义，只起连接词的作用，解释说明名词"a danger"的具体内容．

解答 Nowadays，more and more students，either struggling or excelling，are turnging into private tutors．，despite the high tuition．（概括）
Some reasons can account for the social phenomenon．Many parents，for various reasons，missed the chance of obtaining good education．When their children meet with difficulties in study，they are helpless．【高分句型一】So private tutoring is the only solution．Besides，as private tutorign is usually one-to-one，parents believe the teacher can instruct the students better．【高分句型二】（分析社会上私人辅导受欢迎的原因）
However，I have reservations about hiring a private tutor．To begin with，the high costs of tutoring can be a burden to many families．In addition，the students are already under a lot of pressrure．There is a danger that students will lose the love of learning with too much work．【高分句型三】In conclusion，both parents and students should be able to rely entirely on their school．（个人观点---反对）

点评读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．