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2.As we have learned in the text,Dr Yuan(袁隆平) had a dream about rice and plants as tall as sorghum.We know why he had the dream and what he did for his dream.请根据以下提示写一篇关于"我的梦想"的短文.字数为100左右.
1.What is/was your dream?
2.Why does/did you have the dream?
3.What have you done or are you doing for your dream?
4.Your hope.
Teenagers like dreaming.When I was in the primary school,I dreamt that I would one day become a doctor.As you know,in my country so may people suddenly died of deadly diseases,such as cancer at an early age.Although they had a lot money,hospitals still cannot save them from the disease.So I wanted to be doctor,hoping to study the cancer and find the way to cure it.
Dreams have the greatest power in the world.Dreams can make people happy and be hard working.In order to realize my dream,I made great efforts to improve my study.Now I'm studying in a senior high school,where I am making use of every minute to make as much as progress as I can in my study.I hope I can be admitted into a famous medical university.
I will hold on to my dream and will find my own way to become a doctor..

分析 这是一篇开放式作文,写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.
亮点句型一:When I was in the primary school,I dreamt that I would one day become a doctor.当我在小学的时候,我梦想有一天我会成为一名医生.这是一个复合句,
When I was in the primary school引导的是时间状语从句,that I would one day become a doctor是dreamt的宾语从句,
.亮点句型二:Now I'm studying in a senior high school,where I am making use of every minute to make as much as progress as I can in my study现在我在一所高中学习,在那里我利用每一分钟尽可能多的让我的学习进步.这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词a senior high school在定语从句中做地点状语,由关系副词where引导.

解答 Teenagers like dreaming.When I was in the primary school,I dreamt that I would one day become a doctor.(亮点句型一)As you know,in my country so may people suddenly died of deadly diseases,such as cancer at an early age.Although they had a lot money,hospitals still cannot save them from the disease.So I wanted to be doctor,hoping to study the cancer and find the way to cure it.
Dreams have the greatest power in the world.Dreams can make people happy and be hard working.In order to realize my dream,I made great efforts to improve my study.Now I'm studying in a senior high school,where I am making use of every minute to make as much as progress as I can in my study(亮点句型二).I hope I can be admitted into a famous medical university.
I will hold on to my dream and will find my own way to become a doctor.

点评 考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示.给考生自由发挥的余地较大.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭.同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.

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