Question

1．请根据下面四幅图内容，展开合理想象，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事．

注意：1）词数 100左右；
2）参考词汇：驾照driving license．

Answer 1

分析 图画作文是较难的题型之一，因此考生应该特别认真地对待．这类题一般要求考生仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文．实际上，图画作文也可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写．首先来描述图画并揭示其寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以），其次分析原因，最后发表评论或提出建议，面对此类题型，考生应首先确定主题，然后再动笔．尤其要注意图画中人或物（人与物）的体貌表情特征和背景，确定人物之间，人物与背景之间的主要关系，以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息．考生应该展开合理而丰富的联想，用生动恰当的言辞抒发自己对图画的所思、所想、所感．注意图画作文中的文字说明．文字说明非常重要，通常十分清楚地提供一些写作要点，考生在看说明时要看清主、谓、宾，正确理解说明的意义．注意这里叙述的是昨天发生的事情，注意动词的时态．
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如was invited to，drinking a lot of beer，got drunk，insisted on还运用了although引导的状语从句等等．并注意了句子的衔接如：As a result，；Fortunately，Naturally； Worse still等等．
He insisted on driving home after the meal，although his friends tried to persuade him not to．（高分句型一）
How he regretted what he had done!（高分句型二）

解答 My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday．
      Towards the evening，he was invited to an inn．He enjoyed his dinner with his friends，drinking a lot of beer．As a result，he got drunk．He insisted on driving home after the meal，although his friends tried to persuade him not to．（高分句型一）
      A few minutes later，he was winding his way on the street．And then his car ran into a tall tree．Fortunately，he was still alive，though seriously injured．The police came to the scene，and he was taken to hospital．Naturally，he had to stay in hospital for several days．Worse still，his driving license was revoked．How he regretted what he had done!（高分句型二）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．