Question

随着社会和经济的发展，人类的活动越来越多，很多动植物濒临灭绝。请你根据以下提示，以 “Wildlife Protection”为题写一篇120词左右的文章，说明如何保护濒危野生动植物。

原因	栖息地破坏     2、食物短缺     3、过度猎杀     ……
如何保护	保护环境       2、建立保护区   3、禁止捕杀    ……
呼吁	……

 
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Answer 1

With the development of society and economy , many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. Above all, their habitat is threatened, resulting in a lack of food. Besides, they are being hunted without mercy.
As we know, animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too. Second, we can collect money to help protect wildlife and build reserves. As for the government, it should pass laws to prevent endangered animals from being hunted. 
In a word, human beings should learn to live in peace with wildlife. If everyone makes a little contribution, it will make a big difference for wild animals. Let’s take action right now.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求以“Wildlife Protection”为题写一篇120词左右的文章，说明如何保护濒危野生动植物。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.要点已经很具体,考生需要进行准确表达.别忘了发表自己的观点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too.这句话用了并列句，原因状语从句，时间状语从句，要求考生有很强的驾驭能力。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。