Question

【题目】假如你是李华，欲与本校另外四名同学组建一支乐队，但缺乏经验，请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯（Cousins）先生发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助。

1 成员中有三名男生和两名女生，均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈。

2 每周只在周末排练，时间是否足够？初期演奏宜多元化还是一种风格？

3 怎样获得较多的表演机会？

4 希望他能为乐队起个名字。

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. I, together with two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance. I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? How can we get more chances to perform? We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.

Looking forward to your reply

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，欲与本校另外四名同学组建一支乐队，但缺乏经验，请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯（Cousins）先生发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助。1.成员中有三名男生和两名女生，均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈。2. 每周只在周末排练，时间是否足够？初期演奏宜多元化还是一种风格？3. 怎样获得较多的表演机会？4. 希望他能为乐队起个名字。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。避免全部使用简单句。

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