题目内容
假如你的名字叫李鲁,你发现你的朋友小磊染上了抽烟的习惯。你不好意思当面劝说他。请你给他写一电子邮件劝他戒烟。内容包括:1.抽烟的危害。2.如何戒烟和健康生活。
词数要求:100-120词
Dear Xiaolei,
I hear you have started smoking recently. I feel a little worried and I think you should quit smoking. Maybe it is easier for you to accept my suggestions in this letter.
Smoking dose great harm to your health. Many diseases are caused by smoking, of which the most serious is lung cancer. Besides,smoking is a waste of money and careless smokers may cause dangerous fires!
Use different ways to give up smoking. Focus on other worthwhile things,such as taking exer-cise regularly. Then don’t go to the places where people smoke.You need have an iron will to quit smoking.When eager to smoke,you can have some candies instead of cigarettes.Think more about the harm of smoking and the people you love.
I believe you will make it and enjoy a healthy life-style!
Yours,
Li Lu
【解析】这是一篇书信类写作,题目中已经给定大致内容,写作时要注意适当增加内容,以保证文章的连贯性。首段主要描述了题目所给的内容,用 I think you should quit smoking. 这样的句子委婉表达自己的建议,然后在下文提出具体建议。用短语dose great harm和Many diseases are caused by smoking, of which the most serious is lung cancer. 这个定语从句说明吸烟的危害性,给出smoking is a waste of money and careless smokers may cause dangerous fires!这样的理由进行劝服。然后在第三段,用Use different ways to give up smoking.总领全段,有层次的提出自己的建议。最后通过I believe you will make it and enjoy a healthy life-style!表达自己的希望和祝福。总结:写作书信时一定要注意文章结构,表达请求要合理,提出建议时要具有说服力,对于一些常用的动词,要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点,要灵活运用各种短语来表明自己的想法。
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