Question

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近年来，交通事故及其造成的死亡人数有所增加。请根据以下表格中的提示，写一篇短文，分析事故原因并提出解决这一问题的措施。

原因	司机：醉驾；疲劳驾驶；超速；开车时接打电话…
行人：闯红灯；在机动车道上骑车；骑车时戴耳机听音乐…
措施	1. ……   2. …… (至少两条)

注意：1. 开头已给出，不计在字数之内。

2. 提示：疲劳驾驶 fatigue driving

The number of road accidents and the deaths arising from those accidents has increased over the past years.        　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

                                                                            

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The number of road accidents and the deaths arising from those accidents has increased over the past years. Below are some of the major causes of road accidents.

Firstly, some people drive after consuming too much alcoholic drinks or are drunk. Besides, fatigue driving and speeding are also causes of road disasters. Thirdly, drivers speaking on mobile phones, which takes their attention from the road, leads to the happening of accidents, too. However, many accidents are related to pedestrians, some of whom ignore traffic lights or cross roads at a wrong place. On the other hand, sometimes cyclists ride bicycles on the pavement or wear headsets, listening to music, which is an open invitation to accidents.

It is high time we realized the potential causes of traffic accidents and acted to prevent them. The government should make stricter laws to punish those who violate traffic regulations. On top of that, parents and teachers have a responsibility to teach children how to cross the road safely. Only in this way can road users enjoy a safe life. (158words)

【解析】

试题分析：考查表格类作文的写作。是关于交通事故及其造成的死亡人数有所增加。请根据表格中的提示，写一篇短文，分析事故原因并提出解决这一问题的措施。具体信息是以表格的形式给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型如drivers speaking on mobile phones, which takes their attention from the road, leads to the happening of accidents, too.等结构，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性。如It is high time we realized the potential causes of traffic accidents and acted to prevent them.等

考点：考查表格类作文的写作

点评：本文属于表格类作文，此类作文虽然好写，但是要写出特色是很不容易的。关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化。