题目内容
请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened/reduced while happiness will be doubled.
注意:
①无须写标题;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its important too much. By sharing, we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.
When it comes to this topic , memories flood into my mind. There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam, my world turned grey and I lost interest in everything until my best friend came up to comfort me. Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared my trouble with him ,---which relived me of troubles soon. Littlie by little I regained my confidence. The following months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made great progress in another important exams.
As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence. Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also mentally/psychologically.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语When it comes to当提到。。;was caught in陷入 ;lost interest in失去兴趣;Littlie by little渐渐地;made great progress取得进步;We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its important too much这个句子in which引导world的定语从句;There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam,这个句子运用到there was a time when曾经有这样一段时光;Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared my trouble with him这个句子用到非谓语动词做状语;As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence这个句子运用到强调句。
考点:提纲类作文