Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的好朋友Dickon 就如何提高写作水平征求你的意见。你给他写了一封信，给出了两个建议：一个是建议他学好习惯用语和句子结构并用他们造句；另一个是建议他多阅读和背诵一些好文章。

注意：

1. 词数100左右，

2. 为使行文连贯，可以适当增加内容；

3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Dickon,

______________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dickon,

I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestions. I think the most important thing is not to be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you can do the following things: First, do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them. Second, read as much as possible. There are many things that can’t be learnt at a time. You must read them in books for many times. Then you’ll be able to use them correctly. So, in order to write well, you must learn to read much. Finally, you’d better recite some good passages.

Good luck to you in your writing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇作文是一篇建议信。假定你是李华，你的好朋友Dickon 就如何提高写作水平征求你的意见。你给他写了一封信，给出了两个建议：一个是建议他学好习惯用语和句子结构并用他们造句；另一个是建议他多阅读和背诵一些好文章。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

亮点：本篇作文一开始就用一个并列句点出建议的原因： “I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestions.”和宾语从句“I think the most important thing is not to be disappointed. Many students find it difficult to write well.”道出建议的原因。接着用一个短语“In my opinion,”引出自己的建议，使用一个条件状语从句“if you want to improve your writing, you can do the following things:” 展开建议的内容。再使用顺序连接词“First，…second，…then，…so，…finally”把要点连接起来，同时使用各种句式，如2个祈使句“First, do some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them. Second, read as much as possible”，一个定语从句“There are many things that can’t be learnt at a time.”同时还使用一些提建议的语句如“you must…”“you’d better…”等，使文章一气呵成，如流水般，简明扼要，目的明确，具有很强的说服力。