Question

　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分１0分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms Smith,

I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art

exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9^th of July

in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but

high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.

As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite

For you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Ms Smith,

I am secretary of City Student Union (CSU).We were organizing an art exhibition for high school student

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in ^ city .This will be held on the 9^th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai.More

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than 1000 painting will be on show ,but high school students and teachers from all the eight

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districts will come to the event .As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school

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students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition .We would be grateful when you could join

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them that day .Looking forward to hear from you soon .

us                                  hearing

Yours,

Li Ming

解析:

1. 从上下文中可以看出，要用现在进行时，而非过去进行时态。

2. 这里的城市我所在的城市，当然要加定冠词。

3. this指代是上一句中的an art exhibition，要用it.

4. painting为可数名词，既然是1000多幅，要用复数。

5. 这里是承接上一句的意思，而非转折。

6. be popularly with中要用形容词，因为这里作表语，而非修饰动词。

7. invite为及物动词，后面不必接介词。

8. 这里表示的是虚拟语气，要用if.

9. 这是一份邀请函，应是加入到我们之中。

10. 在look forward to中to是介词，后接动词时要动名词形式。