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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Katherine,
How exciting I am to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday.Fortunately, I won' t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.You won' t find difficult to get to the city center.The airport bus left every 30 minute and will take you right to the International Hotel.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.I will take you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we' 11 talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.Having a pleasant trip and see you on Friday.
Sincerely yours
Zhang Lin


第一行去掉me; visit后面不接双宾语。
Fortunately改为unfortunately.我不能去机场接你是不幸运的事情。
although改为because / as;上下文是因果关系。
find后面加it; it是形式宾语,指代后面的to get to the city center。
left改为leaves; 通篇都是现在时;
minute改为minutes; 前面有30,后面应该使用复数。
or改为and; 根据上下文可知不是转折关系,而是顺接关系。
having改为have;这里是应该祈使句表示祝愿。

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Many years ago, I was travelling in the northwest of Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

                                           

forest all day, I was returning alone to the place which I had put up my tent. It was growing dark

                                       

but I was walking along a narrow path. On my right was a wide river, and on my left , thick dark

                                                                

forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

 

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

                                             

I looked to the right. In the river there was a huge crocodile waited to welcome me with its

                                               

mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

                                         

think was happened? The tiger had jumped right over me and was now in the mouth of the

  

crocodile. Believe or not!

 

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