Question

假定你是李明， 2012年国庆长假期间，你与同学结伴前往韩国观光旅游。在此期间，导游朴静女士对你们的行程作了周密安排，给大家无微不至的照顾。回国后，你用英语给朴静女士写一封信，表示感谢，内容要点如下：

1. 帮助我们了解韩国历史和文化，带领大家参观名胜古迹，如：大长今的拍摄地；

2. 充当购物向导，向我们介绍闻名的韩国化妆品和高丽人参；

3. 在济州岛，我的行李不慎丢失，导游帮忙找回；

4. 有机会欢迎来贵州玩，顺便帮忙带一个我最渴望拥有的韩版Galaxy 3（手机）。

要求：1.120个词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇: Dae Jang Genm大长今；filming location 拍摄地；cosmetics化妆品；   

Korean ginseng 高丽人参；Jizhou Island济州岛；

Dear Miss Piao,

Many thanks for your arrangement and care during our stay in Korea!

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Yours truly

Li Ming

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Miss Piao,

Many thanks for your arrangement and care during our stay in Korea!

How time flies! It’s been almost three months since we spent time together in Korea. And I’m writing to show my gratitude for your providing us with such an unforgettable experience, letting us have a rough knowledge of Korean history and culture as well as visit some places of interest there, among them a filming location of the famous TV play Dae Jang Genm included.

Later on the second day, under your guidance, we had a great time doing some shopping in Seoul, during which time you introduced us some famous cosmetics and the Korean ginsengs. Besides, I’d like to say “thanks a billion” again for helping me to get my missing baggage back while we were lost in the scenic spots of Jizhou Island.

Should you get a chance some day, welcome to make a trip to Guizhou. And, in turn, I'll be more than happy to be your guide! By the way, I’d appreciate it if you could bring me a Korean Galaxy III, one I have eagerly awaited for ages！

Best regards！

Yours truly

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇以写信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

考点：考查综合能力

点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。