Question

【题目】一个人在成长过程中必然会遇到烦恼，但是它也能带给你收获，例如：不得不做一些自己不愿做的事情，但最终发现它却带给你许多收益。请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：

1. 描述一件你曾经不愿但却不得不做的事；

2. 说说这件事最终带给你的收获和启示。

注意：词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

We need to face a lot of pains as we grow up. But these pains eventually bring us gains. _______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

We need to face a lot of pains as we grow up. But these pains eventually bring us gains. As for me, I remember that my parents made me learn to play the violin during my childhood, so I had little time to play with my friends, which annoyed me quite a lot. I hated the violin at that time, just because it was what they forced me to do.

Now looking back, I appreciate what my parents did for me. In fact, music has enriched my life. It gives me comfort, relief and joy, especially when I am under pressure. I have come to understand why my parents were always pushing me on.

Everybody will experience pains. A little hard work and sweat will never hurt us. If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our way to success, we can understand they are actually gains

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇短文写作。首先根据文章的开头一个人在成长过程中必然会遇到烦恼，但是它也能带给你收获。首先要描述一件你曾经不愿但不得不做的事情，然后说说这件事最终带给你的收获和启示，比如你获得了哪些好处以及对你的生活带来的改变。最后再总结一下自己的观点，

【亮点说明】第一段首先描述了作者小时候被父母逼着学习小提琴，导致没有时间跟朋友玩耍，作者那时候觉得很苦恼。本段中用了which引导的一个定语从句。第二段作者说这件事启示给自己带来了很多收获，比如说丰富了生活，可以帮助减压、放轻松等作用。最后一段与开头收尾呼应，每个人都会经历不开心的事，但是我们可以从中学到很多有的东西。整篇文章语言言简意赅，感情真挚，所有要点都没有遗漏。文章连贯通顺。