Question

10．假如你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状．请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题．信的内容应包括下列要点：焦虑症状头晕、乏力、睡眠不好等1）考前制定好合适的复习计划2）睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠．
注意：1．根据以上内容写一篇短文，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯．
词数：100左右．开头已给出，不计词数．
参考词汇：头晕-dizzy （adj．）
Dear editor，
I'm Li Ming of Senior Three，Guangming Middle School．I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．
                  ．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文对考生的要求较高，要求考生首先读懂原文，再根据文字提示写作．写信的要点都隐含在信中，再读懂文章的基础上，要考生自己归纳出来，再一一进行解决，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采．
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语suffer from遭受；have an effect on 对…有影响；First of all首先；get rid of摆脱；First of all，it's important for us to make careful plans for every exam．这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us have a sound sleep这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句；
Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam．（高分句型一）
We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us have a sound sleep．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear editor，
      I am Li Ming of Senior Three，Guangming Middle School．I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam．（高分句型一）Some will feel dizzy or tired，and some will suffer from lack of sleep．In fact，all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we have to get rid of them．
       First of all，it's important for us to make careful plans for every exam．In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams．We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us have a sound sleep．（高分句型二）Besides，enough rest can make us energetic and perform well in an exam．
       Finally，I hope everybody can do a good job in each exam．
                                                       
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．