Question

你捡到了一个紫色的女士手包。请你根据提示给失主写信。

1. 当日下午在金宝街西头的一个角落里拾得；

2. 手包内发现失主名片及失主的护照和信用卡；

3. 名片上的电话打不通, 希望尽快取得联系, 你的电话号码：13801672389。

注意：

1. 词数不少于50。

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Ms White,

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___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms White,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to you about a purple purse I picked up this afternoon. I happened to find it lying in a corner on the west end of the Jinbao Street. Besides your name card, I found a passport and a credit card in it, both of which have your name on them. So you must be the owner of the purse. I telephoned you at the number on your name card, but couldn’t get through. I know you must be very worried at the moment and hope you can see my e-mail right now and contact me immediately.

I’ll be waiting for your reply, or you can telephone me. My telephone number is 13801672389.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据提示，给失主写一封信。写作要点包括：拾到手包的时间、地点；手包内的物品和自己的联系方式等三个方面。词数在50词左右，注意书信的格式，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；内容充实，交际得体，逻辑清晰，语言准确；范文还使用了定语从句、宾语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：定语从句I picked up this afternoon和both of which have your name on them；宾语从句hope you can see my e-mail right now等，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用so, but, and, or等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了happen to do sth; find sth doing; get through, at the moment, right now等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

考点：书信类作文