Question

[写作内容]

假设你是李华，你的好友Tom不善于交际，来信总是向你诉说他在交往方面的烦恼，请你就此向你的朋友提出一些提议。建议内容包括以下几点：

1.         宽容（tolerant）

2.         多微笑

3.         和别人在一起时，不要保持沉默

[写作要求]

1.          只能使用五个句子表达全部内容

2.          开头结尾已给出不计入总字数

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯

Dear Tom,

You often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others. Here are my suggestions and I hope they can help.

                                                                               

                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                               

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

You often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others. Here are my suggestions and I hope they can help.

First of all, try to be tolerant, because everyone has his or her own personalities, some of which May annoy you, but you should realize everyone is different and that your personality may also annoy others. If you think a person is so difficult to get along with, it may be just because he deals with something in a way different from yours. Secondly, smile as much as possible, which is an effective way to fill the gaps between people and is sure to bring you a lot of friends. Rather than keep silent when you are with someone, try to start a relaxing conversation with a topic that everybody has something to talk about.

Above all, being active and outgoing can help you to do better in communication.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。