Question

20．假定你是李华，你的外籍同学Jim时常为中文写作而发愁并发来邮件向你求助．请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示安慰和鼓励；
2．提供几条提高中文写作能力的建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．
I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．I can understand how you feel about it．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．However，there is no need to worry．If you make a determined effort，you will surely improve it．
First of all，read as many Chinese articles as possible．The more you read，the more inspirations you willget．Meanwhile，you will gradually get a good knowledge of the Chinese language．Secondly，form a habit ofcollecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．Finally，practise writing in Chinese often．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．
Hope you can make great progress in your Chinese writing．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是李华写给外籍同学Jim的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表示安慰和鼓励；二提供几条提高中文写作能力的建议；三表达希望．高分句型：1．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．句子里As引导非限制性定语从句，表示"正如"； plays an important part表示"起到重要的作用"；as well表示"也"．正如我们所知，汉语的写作能力在学校和生活中起到重要的作用．2．Secondly，form a habit of collecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．句子里，主句是一个祈使句，以动词原形form开头；which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句里的beautiful Chinese sentences．第二，养成收集和背诵优美汉语语句的习惯，你可以在在写作里运用它们．

解答 Dear Jim，
     I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．I can understand how you feel about it．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．【高分句型一】However，there is no need to worry．If you make a determined effort，you will surely improve it．（表示安慰和鼓励）
    First of all，read as many Chinese articles as possible．The more you read，the more inspirations you will get．Meanwhile，you will gradually get a good knowledge of the Chinese language．Secondly，form a habit of collecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．【高分句型二】Finally，practise writing in Chinese often．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．（提供几条提高中文写作能力的建议）
   Hope you can make great progress in your Chinese writing．（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上．一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档