Question

13．国务院近来颁布了关于公共场所严禁吸烟的规定．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，请你就现在很多青少年吸烟的现象写一篇文章．内容包括以下要点：
1．现象：很多青少年吸烟；
2．分析原因；
3．你的观点．
注意：
1．词数：100-120；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于青少年吸烟的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：很多青少年吸烟现象；分析原因；你的观点．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为青少年吸烟现象．第二部分为分析原因．第三部分为作者的观点．
重点短语与句型：
 on the rise 增长
in all walks  各行各业
account for 解释，说明…的原因
be  harmful to 对…有害
make progress 取得进步
高分句型一：It is reported that the number of teenage smokers has been on the rise in recent years，which has caused great concern among people in ail walks or life．此句用了It is V-ed that…"据说"句型和which引导的非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：They can buy what they want，including cigarettes此句用了what 引导的宾语从句．

解答 It is reported that the number of teenage smokers has been on the rise in recent years，which has caused great concern among people in all walks or life．（高分句型一）（青少年吸烟现象）
     There are several reasons that account for this fact．First of all，it is easy for teenagers to get cigarettes．Cigarettes are available almost everywhere．Today's teens have more spare money，which comes from the improved living standard of their parents．They can buy what they want，including cigarettes．（高分句型二）Second，the teen years are the time when young people want to be more independent from their parents and form their own values．The enormous mental pressures of these years can make some people turn to smoking．（分析原因）
    Smoking is very harmful to our health．It does great harm not only to our health，but also to our mind，especially for us teenagers．I think we middle school students are the future builders of our country．We should study hard and make progress every day．We should form good habits so that we can spend our time learning things useful and valuable for our motherland and people．（作者的观点）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．