假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The way of communication in people's life has changed a lot of in recent years．In the past，people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone．But now almost everyone have a mobile phone．People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time．What's more，people have easy access the Internet，it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like．With these changes，people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been made more efficiently．It used to take them several days to hear from each other，and now it takes only several minutes，even if we are in two different continents．

分析文章大意：本文主要讲述了在近几年人们交流方式的改变．过去，人们主要通过写信或用公用电话，而现在几乎每个人都有手机，而且人们可以上网，这使得我们的交流变得更有效．

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and accept e-mails whenever they like．With these changes，people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been
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made more efficiently．It used to take them several days to hear from each other，and now it takes only several minutes，
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even if we are in two different continents．
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1．去掉of．考查短语搭配． a lot of许多，其中of是介词，后面需要跟名词作宾语，这里没有of的宾语，因此要去掉of，故此处把of去掉．
2．keep--kept．考查时态．句子的时间状语是in the past，是过去时间，句子应该用一般过去时，故此处把keep改为kept．
3．use--using．考查动名词．by是介词后面跟动词的ing形式，or连接writing letters和use the public telephone，因此use的形式应该和writing形式一致，故此处把use改为using．
4．have--has．考查主谓一致．句子的主语是everyone，是第三人称单数，故句子谓语应该用has，故把have改为has．
5．access 后面加to．考查介词搭配． have access to sth．是接近某物，此处缺少介词to，故此处加上to．
6．it--which．考查定语从句．逗号之后是一个非限制性定语从句，it不能做关系代词，关系代词应该用which，故此处把it改为which．
7．accept--receive．考查动词．接收邮件应该用receive，accept表示主动接受．
8．efficiently--efficient．考查形容词．这是一个被动句，变为主动形式应该是make people's work efficient，此处由形容词作宾语补足语．
9．and--but．考查连词，根据句意判断前后两句是转折关系，故此处把and改为but．
10．we--they．考查人称代词．根据前半句的them判断此处的人称与句意不符，故此处应该把we改为they．

点评改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．