Question

【题目】假定你是某中学的学生会主席李华。最近，一批来自英国的高中生将来你校访问。请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动，内容包括：

1. 参观校园；

2. 观看介绍学校的短片；

3. 体验中国传统成人礼（adulthood ceremony）。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends,

Welcome to our school.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends，

Welcome to our school.I'm Li Hua, president of the Student Union.Now I'd like to tell you about the schedule for your visit today. First of all, I will show you around our campus so that you can get a general impression of our school.After that, you'll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school.What's more, you will take part in an ancient adulthood ceremony, which provides a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture.I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.In conclusion, I wish you a good stay with us.

Thanks.

【解析】

本文是一篇发言稿。最近，一批来自英国的高中生将来你校访问。要求写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动，内容包括：1. 参观校园；2. 观看介绍学校的短片；3. 体验中国传统成人礼（adulthood ceremony）。

第一步：根据提示确定本文是发言稿。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：Welcome to our school. the schedule for your visit, show around, a short video, adulthood ceremony, unforgettable experience.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如目的状语从句so that you can get a general impression of our school.定语从句that will help you learn more about the history, which provides a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture.宾语从句it will be an unforgettable experience for you.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。