Question

书面表达(满分30分)

中美中学生交流项目安排一批美国中学生来华一周体验中国文化，在网上挑选适合住宿的家庭（homestay family）。假如你是北仑中学的学生李华，愿意接受一位美国学生入住你家，请用英语给项目美方负责人写一封邮件，说明你的家庭和住宿条件，你本人的优势以及你帮助美国中学生体验中国文化的打算。

注意：

1．可适当增加细节；

2．词数：100左右；开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数；

Dear sir,

I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the Americanstudents.____________________________________________________________

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_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir,

I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.

My parents are in favor of my idea that I host an American student. We live in a beautiful community. Luckily, we have extra room for guests so that they can have private living space. I am a student of Xinhua high school, open-minded and enthusiastic. What’s more, I’m quite good at languages and we can communicate well in English.

If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area. Besides, My parents and I will help her to make Chinese meals, such as jiaozi, noodles, and other foods.

We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.

Looking forward to your reply.          

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。这是封申请信，愿意接受一位美国学生入住你家，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area.使用了非限制性定语从句，还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，象what’s more和besides等词，这样文章显得更连贯。

考点：考查书信类短文写作。

点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。