题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是高三学生李华,学校将为高一新生举办主题为“A Positive Attitude Leads to Success and Happiness”的英语沙龙活动,特请你准备一份英语发言稿。内容包括:
1. 积极的人生态度的重要性;
2. 如何培养积极的人生态度。
注意:词数100字左右。
【答案】
Boys and girls,
Good morning! It is a great honor to be here to share with my opinions on “ A Positive Attitude Leads to Success and Happiness”.
As we all know, a positive attitude is the key to success. If we develop a positive attitude, we’ll enjoy a happy and successful life.
How to develop a positive attitude? First of all, let’s always look at the bright side of life. We should never lose hope even if we suffer from failure. Second, we should learn to laugh more. As Victor Hugo once said, “Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.” When we laugh, we feel relaxed and happy.
Life is like a mirror. Smile at it, and it will smile back at you. Let’s keep optimistic attitude and we’ll be in a better position to live a rich and varied life. We are sure to succeed sooner or later.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据写作要求可知要写一片发言稿,一篇关于正确的态度是成功和幸福关键的发言稿。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如 As we all know, a positive attitude is the key to success. As引导非限制性定语从句,as指代后面整一句话。We should never lose hope even if we suffer from failure. 是even if引导让步状语从句,还有Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.是that引导定语从句,that指代先行词the sun。此外,文章还使用了大量短语 It is honor to do sth, lead to ,the key to,first of all,suffer from, drive...from,live a happy and varied life等。连接词 even if以及副词first of all的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。