题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是中学生陈丽,下学期你将作为交换生要到英国住在Jim先生家里,请根据下列要点提示给他写一封80-100词的电子邮件:
1. 很高兴住到Jim先生家里。
2. 询问Jim家概况,是否临近学校,交通是否便利。
3. 自己不习惯英国饭菜,询问附近是否有中国餐馆。
【答案】
Dear Mr. Jim,
I am Chen Li and very glad to stay in your family as an exchange student from China. Now I am writing to ask you some questions. Firstly, would you please give me a brief introduction of your family? How many people are there in your family and do you raise pets? Secondly, is it far from your house to the school and is it convenient to go around the city in your district?
What’s more, it will take me a long time to get used to western food, so are there any Chinese restaurants nearby where I can enjoy some Chinese food? I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.
Yours Sincerely
Chen Li
【解析】
试题分析:本文是篇材料作文,材料非常简单,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,所以要用一般现在时。要求让你针对中学生要上各种补习班,家长认为学生应该把更多的时间用在学习上等谈谈你的想法和建议。因此本文不止用一种人称。还应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。还需要注意字数要求。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常用的短语What’s more而且;be glad to do 高兴做某事;ask sb some questions问某人一些问题。Secondly, is it far from your house to the school and is it convenient to go around the city in your district这个句子it做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;are there any Chinese restaurants nearby where I can enjoy some Chinese food?这个句子where引导定语从句;