Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况	1、英语学习的目标；
	2、英语学习的方法；
	3、课外自学的途径；
	……
对学校英语教学的建议	（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议。

注意：1、对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、文中不得提及学生所在学校和本人姓名。

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teachers and schoolmates,it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I’m interested in English,and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally,it’s very important for me to learn English well.As everybody knows,vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a building.I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.After class,I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio.

Now,I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally, I suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文，根据提示信息来阐明自己对英语学习的观点。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，行文要有逻辑和适当的连接词。 3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。注意：注意：1、对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2、词数100左右。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构，有恰当的连接词使得文章条理清晰。比如After,Firstly,Secondly，Finally等连接词的使用让文章看起来思路清楚，同时运用了许多高级词汇。句型多样，如Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.是宾语从句，还有Dear teachers and schoolmates,it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.运用了it’s a great pleasure for sb. to do sth句型。Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。