Question

书面表达（满分25分）

最近，很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作为展示自己的窗口，可以释放学习的压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师都认为管理个人博客要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。请对这一现象进行简要介绍，并发表自己的看法。   

注意：1．词数：l00左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2．参考词汇：开博客open one’s blog。

Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowdays ,there is a phenomenon that more and more high school students open thire own blogs on the Internet .For one thing ,it can provide a colorful platform to shoucase thire talent ,and it is a way to release thire pressure ,and all this makes it more and more popular with high school students.But many parents and teachers hold a different view ,they think that managing one’s blog will take a lot of time and energy,while this should be used to study which is thire main responsibility .

In my opinion ,I do opprove of this activity.Opening and organizing an eye catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skilful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.

Blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是对学生开博客的不同观点，题目给出了大部分要点，也要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是一些同学反对的观点，然后是赞同的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。

考点：考查正反方观点作文写作

点评：本文属于正反方观点作文，但是要点给出的比较全，只需要考生表达清楚，还有自己的观点。在写作的时候要适合合适的连接词来连接各要点，使他们成为整体。要选择高级的词汇和句型，让文章有变化，有层次。