题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华。你刚刚参加了学校组织的桑基鱼塘(mulberry dyke fish pond)研学体验活动,感受到农业文化遗产的魅力。兴奋之余,你写了 e-mail 与美国笔友Alan 交流本次研学情况和感受。
要求:
1. 依据下图简介桑基鱼塘原理。
2. 词数 100 左右。
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【答案】Dear Alan,
Have you ever heard of mulberry dyke fish pond? I have taken part in a school trip to our local mulberry dyke fish pond and it’s amazing!
Mulberry trees are planted along the fish pond. Silkworms feed on the tree leaves and produce silkworm excrement which the fish in the pond feed on. The fertile pond sludge in turn can be used as fertilizer for the mulberry trees. Thus there forms a perfect circulation where the beings rely on each other and keep a balanced food chain.
Isn’t it magical? I feel really proud of the wisdom passed on from ancient people. Next time you come to China, I can take you there to have a fantastic experience.
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封书信:假如你是李华。你刚刚参加了学校组织的桑基鱼塘(mulberry dyke fish pond)研学体验活动,感受到农业文化遗产的魅力。兴奋之余,你写了 e-mail 与美国笔友Alan 交流本次研学情况和感受。要求依据下图简介桑基鱼塘原理。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; amazing(不可思议的),plant(种植),fertile(富饶的),fertilizer(肥料), balanced(平衡的),circulation(循环),food chain(食物链)及wisdom(智慧)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。