Question

假如你叫李明。你的好友Mark生病了，在家复习迎考。以下是学校关于期末考试的通知，请根据该通知写一份120左右的e-mail给Mark，告诉他考试的情况。

Notice on the Final Exams

时间：下周四——the last day of the exam week 内容：五个问题中任意回答三个；写作文一篇 复习范围：课本，期中考试试卷和笔记。 计分：期末考试占55%；期中考试占25%; 研究性课程占20%。

注意：

1．开头已写好，不计入总词数；

2．生词：研究性课程 research work  分数 grade

Dear Mark,

   It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us．_____________________________________     

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                                             Yours truly,

                                                Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Mark,

   It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us．The final exams will be held next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week．What is different about the exam is that it consists of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions and writing articles．We are supposed to go over our mid-term exam papers, textbooks and class notes to prepare for it．The grade is made up of three parts．The final exams will make up 55% of our grade, the research work 20 and the mid-term exams 25% of it．

   Please feel free to contact if you are still not clear about it．

   Hope you will recover soon and also get a satisfactory mark in the exam．

                                                                          Yours truly,

                                                                           Li Ming

解析:

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