题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国(Chinese knot),但你因故无法前往,你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去,请写一封电子邮件给Ms Jenkins,说明相关情况。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,
I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.
The reason is that I have got a cold, and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so. But don’t worry. I’ve asked a friend of mine, Hart Meimei, to go there instead. She is good at making Chinese knots. She will go to your apartment at 9:00 this Saturday morning.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots. Wish you a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一片提纲类作文。考生在成文时应注意:合理发挥想象力,使文章的表达自然,丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全。注意文章的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词、插入语,使文章表达自然,流畅。根据提示信息可判断出,本文属于应用文中的电子邮件。邮件格式已经给出。该邮件的内容应包括给外教Ms Jenkins写信的原因,以及时间安排。
【范文亮点】
表语从句以及宾语从句。The reason is that I have got a cold,and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so.
Be good at的使用。She is good at making Chinese knots.
同位语从句。I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots.