Question

13．假如你是李华，你的朋友汤姆写信问你暑假的安排．请根据以下内容给汤姆回信．
1．体育锻炼如打篮球、跑步．
2．看英语名著，英语杂志和英文电影以提高英语．
3．找一份暑期兼职工作，赚些零花钱．
4．与朋友游览北京的名胜．
Dear Tom，
                                                           
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Another important thing for me is to read English classics，English magazines and English movies to improve my English．
另一件对我而言重要的是看英语名著，英语杂志和英文电影以提高英语．
高分句型二：
When the travel is over，the new term is coming soon．
旅行结束后，新学期就要来了．

解答 Dear Tom，
 I am very glad to have received your letter．Physical exercise like playing basketball and running is essential in holidays．Another important thing for me is to read English classics，English magazines and English movies to improve my English（高分句型一）．Besides，I am going to take a part-time job for earning some pocket money．Perhaps it will take me a long time．At last I want to visit Beijing with friends．When the travel is over，the new term is coming soon（高分句型二）．Best wishes for you!Thank you!
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．