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分析下面的书面表达，指出其中的错误．

　　下面是某中学对该校200名高中毕业生(男女各100名)的择业理想作出调查后所绘制的图表．请根据表格中情况用英语写一则报导．其中包括：1．数据信息；2．男女择业的差异和共同点；3．对比最大的(striking contrast)职业．

　　Middle school students have more (1) ideas about their future jobs. The most striking contrast is in teaching: thirty percent of girls will (2) like to be teachers but (3) only five percent of boys want to be teachers. Twenty percent of boys want to be businessmen and another twenty percent want to become lawyers, but girls take up fifteen percent in these two fields.

　　That (4) boys like to do most is to become managers, comparing (5) to thirty percent of girls who want to be so. Now with the development of our society, more and more students want to be managers or bosses of some companies. Besides teaching, the second choice of girls is (6) managers. The number is not small. Girls are also expected (7) to show their ability in this field.

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解析：

　　解题思路：(1)去掉more．因为前文未提到任何idea．

　　(2)will改为would，更符合英语表达习惯．因为 would like to…是固定短语．

　　(3)but改为 while，表示对比．

　　(4)that改为 what．因为它在主语从句中作宾语．

　　(5)comparing改为compared．这里应该是过去分词作状语，表示被动的动作．

　　(6)is后面应加上to be或to become．不然，句意不完整．

　　(7)are also expected应改为also expect．这里表示女生们“希望”……


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分析下面的书面表达，指出其中的错误．

　　目前中学生出国学习的现象非常火爆，很多家长也为此不惜代价；请你谈谈你对这种现象的看法，是先上完高中打好基础再出国好，还是趁早出去好．

　　At present, in order to let their children receive better education, some parents send their children abroad to study. This results in that (1) more and more students want to go to (2) abroad to study without finishing their study in the middle school. In my own (3) opinion, I think it is not necessary to go abroad so early.

　　First, the education system and teaching methods are different with (4) ours. I doubt whether you can learn normally abroad. Besides, the cost is very expensive (5) in foreign countries. Since you can not earn enough money by yourself, you have to ask your parents for money. On the other hand, your (6) knowledge is limited for you haven't finished middle school yet. It is not worth spending so much money to study abroad.

　　I suggested (7) to students that they finish middle school and then go to university in their own country. After graduation, you (8) can go abroad to make a further study. That will be much better.

书面表达

下面描绘的是醉酒驾车的违章行为，请你根据这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。要求描述图片的内容，分析问题存在的根源和解决的办法，并发表一下你的看法。

注意：1．可适当发挥想象，避免简单描述。

2．词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3．参考用词safety awareness　安全意识in bad condition处于糟糕状态

This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country．__________________

书面表达（满分25分）   
目前，随着环保意识的增强，越来越多的人们开始倡导低碳生活。请根据下面的图表以及中文提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要描述全球近五十年来气候变化，并分析其产生的主要原因、影响及解决措施。

原因
1）过多使用矿物燃料；
2）过度砍伐森林。
影响
1）海平面上升；
2）极端天气现象增加；
3）自然平衡被破坏。
措施
1）控制二氧化碳排放；
2）采用新型能源
注意：
1．短文必须包括以上图表所表现的主要内容。
2．短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。
3．参考词汇：矿物燃料fossil fuels；二氧化碳carbon dioxide；释放：release
The diagram shows the weather changes in the global climate.                                   



第五部分 书面表达（满分25分）
当前环境问题日益突出，“低碳经济”“低碳生活”应运而生。但是你发现身边的很多同学还没有充分意识到这一点。请结合下面的图片，谈谈你自己的看法。具体要求如下：
1.结合下图简要分析身边同学不符合“低碳生活”的行为；
2.针对这些行为谈谈你对“低碳生活”的看法及应采取的措施。

 

 
 
 

注意：
1．内容可以适当发挥；2．词数150左右；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

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