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【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周爷爷过生日，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇周记。记述你自制相册作为礼物并送出的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was approaching. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?

While I was racking my brain for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all flooded back. It suddenly hit me that I could make a photo album to record those precious moments. Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, an album of love was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.

At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately, tears welling up in his eyes. My parents smiled happily.

The album serves not only as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminds me that I should spend more time with him.

Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was around the corner. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?

While I was racking my brain for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all sprang up. It occurred to me that I could make a photo album to record those precious moments.

Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, a hand-made album full of love insert was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.

At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately, tears welling up in his eyes. My parents smiled happily. The album serves not only as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminds me that I should spend more time with him. Just as the proverb goes, family affection does matter a lot.

【解析】

考查漫画类作文写作。

题目要求假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周爷爷过生日，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇周记。记述你自制相册作为礼物并送出的过程。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般过去时进行写作。根据图画总结要点，要求考生自己发挥拓展，不要背离图画意思，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。