Question

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I've really got to do something to lose weight because

I'm getting much too fat. I wasn't worried about it until I go

                                                        1._________

to see the doctor. He told me that I'd probably had a heart

                                                      2._________

attack while I started eating less. When you're on a diet you

                                                      3._________

have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry.

                                                      4._________

They may be very hard to do and you certainly need a lot

                                                      5._________

of will-power to succeed. So I will stay on a health farm for a

                                                      6._________

month I won't be able to eat much and so I'li have to stick

                                                      7._________

to my diet. I'll also do plenty of exercise, which won't give

                                                      8._________

me any harm too. Both the diet and the exercise will

                                                      9._________

help me to lose weight and feel more better.                               

10._________

Answer 1

1． So→went 

2． had→have

3． while→unless

4． eat→eating 

5． They→This／That／It 

6. √

7． month后加where／when 

8． give→do

9． too→either 

10．more→much或去掉more

解析:

1.时态错误，此句的意思为“我去看了医生后才开始为此担忧”。看医生应为过去的动作。

2.动词的谓语形式出错，此处I'd应为I would，would后该用动词原形。

3.从属连词错，根据逻辑意义该用unless，意为“如果不”“除非”。

4.根据意义，此处eat应为stop的宾语，该用ing形式。

5.指代上文的那件事，所以用单数。

6． √

7. 结构错误。少定语从句的关系词。根据意义，先行词可为farm，也可为month。

8. do sth．harm为固定词组。

9. 此句为否定的定语从句，否定句中该用either。

10. 此句意思为“感觉好多了”，加强比较级语气该用much。